Showing posts with label 300 Dragons. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 300 Dragons. Show all posts

Thursday, July 31, 2014

300 Dragons - Chapter 1

Chapter 1
Jyson

In his dreams, Jyson could always fly. The ground would disappear from under his feet and he would soar through the air, the glaring sun not a torment, but a source of energy. But then he would always wake up.
He has often wondered about the meaning of these dreams, and why they were so consistent. Flight was not something he coveted in his waking hours. He was normally quite content with his feet firmly routed on the ground. It was just during the night …
However, this was not a morning given to contemplation. He and his cousin, Samul, had been summoned to the capitol for the first time, and thoughts could not be spared to anything beyond the fact that they were leaving today.
“Do you think King Hubert is going to prefer you or me me?” Samul asked, flashing Jyson a grin over the stable partition as they saddled their horses. “Because frankly, I don't see how he's going to resist my charming manners.”
Jyson shook his head as he tightened the girth. “If he can get past your pretentious attitude, I think you'll do just fine.”
“It's part of my charm, Jy,” said Samul. “Now you, I really don't know what you have to recommend yourself – unless he's interested in broody young knights given to violent bursts and obsessed with keeping their hands smooth.”
“You never know,” said Jyson, frowning momentarily at his gloved hands. “I've heard that King Hubert can be quite the broody man himself. We might find that we have much in common.”
“If he can get past your gloves.”
“Look, I don't wear gloves because I like it and you know it. It was my father's last order to my mothers that my hands never be seen, and I like to respect that.”
“You don't have to get so worked up about it, Jy,” said Samul, daring to laugh. “I just think that it was a very strange request. Did he think your hands deformed or something.”
Jyson tensed slightly, as he thought of the other part of his father's last order – that he never tell anyone the reason. No, his hands weren't deformed, but the truth was almost as bad. “We'd better get going,” he said aloud, opening the stall door. “We have a good two days' journey ahead of us.”
“You're right, I have two whole days that I can torment you non-stop. I can spread it out, instead of cramming it all in now.”
Jyson took a deep breath, willing himself to ignore his cousin. He liked him and all that, and he could be amusing at times … but there were other times when he could be just a bit exasperating.
“Hey, Jy,” continued Samul. “Do you think there's any chance we might see a dragon on our way there? Because that would be seriously cool.”
“It would only be seriously cool if it stays well away from us. Those beasts breath fire, if you'll remember. That's seriously hot.”
“What's this!” exclaimed Samul in an incredulous voice. “Jyson cracking a joke? The world must be coming to an end!”
Jyson sighed. This was going to be a long two days.

“Hey, Jy! What do you think that is?”
Jyson glanced halfheartedly in the direction Samul was pointing. “I really have no idea.”
“Looks like an umbrella bird to me.”
“They live further south – in the jungles. You're not going to see an Umbrella Bird in the desert.”
“It might be lost.”
“If it is, it'll soon be dead. They can't survive without water.”
“Then we should go rescue it!”
“Samul, if it is an umbrella bird, which I seriously doubt, it can fend for itself. If it isn't, then it can definitely fend for itself.”
“You are so hardhearted, Jy.”
“No.” Jyson sighed again. “I am just mindful of the fact that this is a path of protection, and Grandfather has strictly ordered us to not step off of it for any reason, lest we get lost in the desert ourselves.”
“Ah, he just doesn't want us to have any fun,” said Samul.
“I'm more willing to believe that he doesn't want us to not reach the Capitol,” said Jyson. “If we get lost, it's going to be very hard for us to win the king's favor and all that.”
“Ah, well, when you put it in that light, I suppose that this path does have a certain appeal ...”
Jyson closed his eyes and took a deep breath. He had predicted that two days' travel in an unchanging landscape would make for a very bored Samul, and he had been right. They were barely half a day away from their grandfather's estate, and Samul was already wondering what the hoped-for adventure had done with itself.
His thoughts were suddenly cut short when a strange feeling spread over him. Not foreboding, exactly, but it was something very similar, causing the hair on the back of his neck to rise. “Something's nearby,” he said, not sure why he was so certain of that fact.
“Really?” asked Samul, excitement rising in his voice again. “What? Where?”
“I – I don't know,” said Jyson, frowning. “But it's …” He turned his head in the direction Samul had been pointing. “It's that direction.”
“That's the umbrella bird,” said Samul. “We've already decided that we're going to leave it alone, boring as the prospect is.”
“No … it's …” Jyson found himself unable to speak as the brown creature that Samul had been pointing to suddenly zoomed towards him, becoming recognizable.
“That's no umbrella bird,” said Samul. “That's a dragon.”
Jyson was unable to speak as he reigned in his horse and watched the dragon glide over the burning sand. Its eyes were fixed on him, and Jyson had the oddest feeling of familiarity, as if he had seen those eyes before.
Just before the dragon reached the path, it veered upwards and soon disappeared far into the hazy sky, and the feeling was gone.
Jyson shook himself and turned to his cousin, who had stopped several feet ahead of him. “Well, there's your dragon. Do you mind if the rest of the trip is uneventful?”
“For today at least,” said Samul. “Can't promise tomorrow. Was it too scary for you? It didn't even blow smoke at us!”
“No it was … let's just get going. We're wasting time.” Jyson dug his spurs into the horses sides and he was off again. Samul was not slow to follow suit.
Soon the dragon's eyes were pushed to the back of his mind and all but forgotten.

“And we have arrived intact and without harm,” Samul announced, as they neared the walls of the Capitol. “And in good time, too. We should be able to have a nice, long heart-to-heart conversation with the king, and still have time for supper.”
“We might,” said Jyson, impatiently. “But I really doubt that King Hubert does.”
“Yes, yes, you're right as always, Jy,” said Samul handing his papers to the guard at the side of the gate. “Well, we'll get supper at least, I'm sure.”
“Yes, what a relief,” said Jyson, handing his own papers to the other guard.
“King Hubert is waiting for you,” announced Samul's guard, handing Samul back his papers. “You'll find him in his throne room.”
“Eh, same for you,” said the other guard, handing Jyson his. “Now hurry up.”
“But sirs,” said Samul. “This is our first time to visit our lovely Capitol. We don't know the way to the throne room.”
“The main road will take you straight to the palace gates,” said his guard, irritably. “You can ask for further instructions when you get there.”
“Thank-you kindly, sir,” said Samul, tipping his hat good-naturedly. “Now, if you don't mind, we'll just be along.”
It wasn't until they were through the gates before he finally turned and acknowledged the look that Jyson was giving him. “What?”
“Grandfather told us that the main street leads straight towards the palace gates,” said Jyson. “In fact, that information is pretty much universally known throughout Rintaria.”
“Ah, but I wanted to make them feel useful.”
“You annoyed them, that's what you did.”
“It's good to be among people again, don't you think?” asked Samul, changing the subject, and gesturing to the crowded street spread before them. “The Capitol is certainly a busy place, isn't it?”
“Well, this is where the king lives,” said Jyson. “Of course it's going to be busy.”
Slowly, but surely, they guided their horses through the maze of people. No one took much notice of them, except for a beggar or two asking for alms. At last they came to the magnificent palace gates.
Samul whistled as they dismounted. “And you thought that the gates to the city were something to look at! Why, I do believe that these are solid gold.”
“Nay,” said the bored guard who stood by this gate. “Merely wood covered with gold plate. King Harold doesn't like people knowing that, though. What's your business, gentlemen, or have you only come to ogle at the gates.”
Papers were again produced and examined, and soon the gate was opened for the pair. No sooner had they stepped in the courtyard than a groomsman approached them and claimed their horses. A moment after that, another servant appeared, bidding them to “follow him.”
“And there goes asking for directions,” complained Samul. Jyson just shook his head.
The palace halls were as busy as the streets, but it was an organized busy. Their guide lead them effortlessly though the people bustling here and there, people even pausing to acknowledge their presence. It wasn't long before they found themselves standing before a pair of magnificent doors, solid oak and carved with the most intricate design, which stood open, showing the way into an even more magnificent room.
Unlike the halls, this room was peaceful. The chandeliers glittered on the ceiling, the carpet leading to the throne was pristine, and every step made on the hardwood floor could be heard. The throne itself was on a platform at least twelve feet off of the ground, and was covered in gold and ivory. The throne was also empty.
“Well, well, don't just stand there!” a powerful voice boomed and echoed through the room. “Come in, come in – state your business! What do you want with the great and mighty King Harold?”
Because of the echoing, it took a few seconds before Jyson focused on the speaker, who was a powerfully built man just exiting his prime, his brown hair just beginning to be touched by gray, who stood just to the side of the steps leading up to the throne. He wore a purple robe and a thick band of gold encircled his head.
Jyson and Samul shared a glance before Samul took the initiative to step forward and bow deeply. “Your Majesty, I am Samul, son of Lord Elar, Grandson of Lord Garan, Baron of Ridaria, and this is my cousin, Jyson, whose mother was my father's sister. We have obeyed your especial summons and are willing to receive the honor of joining your service.”
A broad smile spread across King Harold's face, and before Jyson could think to join his cousin in obeisance, had already gestured for Samul to stand back up. “Ah, Garan's grandsons. Fine young men! Your grandfather must be very proud!”
Before either young man could respond, a woman's voice rang out. “But why do you not mention Jyson's father? Do you consider it a shame to be sired by my friend Dular?”
Jyson at last noticed the two ladies seated in luxurious velvet chairs on the other side of the throne. They looked to be the same age, one with rich, golden hair, the other with hair whiter than snow, though it did nothing to make her look older.
The white-haired rose and took a few steps nearer. “Yes, you have grown into a fine young man. I'm sure Dular would have been proud.” She paused and turned an inquiring look towards the golden-haired. “Do you not think so, Analyssa, my daughter?”
Jyson blinked, as he realized who the pair were – Queen Blanche and Princess Analyssa themselves! And it seemed that Queen Blanche's famous youth was no rumor at all.
Princess Analyssa stood up, flicking her skirt with her wrist so that it billowed around her dramatically. “I wouldn't know what Dular would have thought of him, for I never met Dular,” she said, her voice sweet, yet powerful at the same time. “And I do not think it is propitious for me to state my own opinion, mother.” With those words, she swept down the carpet and past Jyson and out of the room. The smell of desert roses lingering momentarily after her.
“Ah, since we are to be denied my daughter's favored opinion, we may as well get down to business,” announced King Harold. “The two of you will make fine additions to my men, if you resemble your fathers even in the slightest.”

“You flatter us, your majesty,” said Samul, dipping into another bow. “We will pleased enough if only our service can bring honor to you.”

Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Better Rainbows

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Hello folks! I'm here with the snippets I promised ya'll on Monday. (Hum ... just found out that I'm technically spelling ya'll wrong. It should be y'all, but my brain rebels at the sight. So I shall continue with the misspelling since spellchecker isn't taking offence.)
Actually, some of these aren't from the last month or two, but not much that I've written the last month or two isn't snippetable. But I don't think ya'll will mind. Have fun, and I hope nothing is too insane.


   “That's what started it,” said Mr. Dially, sighing. “Go tell your mother that it's safe to come in. Roxanne Jade, put that rock down – what have we told you about injuring your brother?”
   Roxanne sighed and let the rock she had pulled out of the wall and was discreetly levitating behind her drop to the ground. “I wasn't going to hurt him. He's too quick.” She nodded with satisfaction to see that her brother was already gone.
   “And there aren't any trees, or even roots here for him to fight you back with,” Mr. Dially pointed out. “You've made this entire room out of inorganic substances.
   Roxanne jabbed a thumb at the stack of papers, “He could have given me a paper cut.”
- HaV Achademy "ROCKS"



The young man seemed about to say something else, but at that moment, Bark came running up with an exclamation of, “Girl! Girl! Foun, Girl! Fight!”
Aoril turned to Bark, raising his eyebrows. “You've found another one and she's fighting you?”
Bark shook her head, almost violently. “Fight!” Without warning, she fell over backwards, her hand pressed her hand over her shoulder. “Girl, fight!”

“She means the girl is injured,” Stardrana translated, realizing what Bark meant. “She uses fight to mean … almost everything.” Bark rewarded her guess by jumping to her feet, nodding and hissing a yes.
- Half-Hidden (Formerly titled "300 Dragons."

At last we came to a stop and he motioned to a shelf of books. "These books are the only books in our library that were written on Earth, and yet speak of this world, of Ooladada.”
“Ooladada?” I repeated. That was a fun word to say.
“Yes, that is the name of this world.”
I wrinkled my nose as I examined the books, slightly disappointed to find that the spines wore neither authors' names, nor titles. “Ooladada,” I repeated, consoling myself with the taste of the funny word.
- Behind the Rainbow

 “Did you hear the news, Tabetha?” Annah whispered a few days later as the two were harvesting Ylia berries in a field just south of the Lilnia city. Their ever-watchful overseer was nearby, but he rarely payed attention to conversations as long as their work didn't slow.
“What news?” Tabetha asked.
“There's a Takkig among us – a real, live Takkig!”
Tabetha's hand wandered briefly to her concealed necklace, before she forced it back onto the task at hand. “Really? Who?”
Annah shrugged. “No one knows. The elves discovered a Koyer among themselves and the Koyer has a twin sister here. That's all we know.”
“Are you sure this isn't just a rumor that someone made up? A Takkig and Koyer among slaves? Mortha's related to them, but that's …”
“Trust me, I have my doubts too,” Annah agreed. “But this actually has a ring of truth to it. A Koyer and Takkig among us would be a disgrace, and the only reason a Harshan would make up the story would be to raise us to anger. We're being told to keep quiet and to carry on as if we don't know.”
“So you think it's the truth?”

“What else is there to think?” asked Annah, with a shrug. Tabetha wanted to ask more, but that shrug meant that Annah was done talking about it.
- The New Division

At last we arrived at the Rainbow and discovered that it was, indeed, books that I had seen stuck in it.
“You know something, sis,” said I, folding my arms over my chest and just taking in the beautiful sight, “I like our rainbow better.”
V frowned. “Better than what?”
“Than other rainbows. Other rainbows have pots of gold at the end – but who needs gold. Books are way better.”
- Behind the Rainbow


     “Hey dad!” Riley exclaimed, grinning from ear to ear. “Mom wants to know if it's safe to come in.”     Mr. Dially glanced up from his papers. “Does it look safe?”     Riley cocked his head to the side as he considered their father's face. “Looks like Rox already took care of your make-up from this morning.”     “Yep,” said Roxanne, “I did.”     “What are you doing back already?” Riley asked, turning to her, “I thought you were going to make the best of it and savor your last day of freedom?”     “What freedom?” she moped. “We're Supers, we don't have any freedom. Neither do civilians, but at least they think they do.”
- HaV Academy "ROCKS" 

 "There's no way that we'll be able to get out of here!" Gavin moaned.
"That's what you think. That's what everyone thinks. But I tell you, there's always a way out of every sticky situation. You just have to be observant and look for it." Leo frowned as he set his now-empty bowl to the side. "It's too bad that Mordreth doesn't have any pretty daughters for us to charm. Only that good for nothing Kew, and I really do not see him helping us. And Prince Arthur's gone, of course, so that's out of the question."
"If Prince Arthur were here," said Gavin, dryly, "We wouldn't be in the dungeon!"
- My Kingdom for a Quest

Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Save Your Fire

Katie has once again called for a show of Snippets! However, this time, unlike usual when I post a whole slew of tiny bits of writing, I shall post one longer segment from each of my writings. Except for The Ankulen. As I've already stated, I'm done sharing bits and pieces of that one. You shall have to wait until the full novel comes out before you can read anymore.



"Well, then," said Mordreth, lowering his voice, causing Gavin to quiver even more fearfully than before. "If you don't have the information I seek, I don't have any use for you anymore. You have until tomorrow afternoon to give me the information I seek. Otherwise ... well, I'll leave it to you to imagine up what I'm planning to do." The window was slammed shut and footsteps were heard trudging away.
"You don't suppose he's going to give us seats of honor in his parade tomorrow?" asked Leo, turning to his friend. "Because that would be very fun."
"It would be, I'm sure ... but knowing Mordreth, it would be a parade to our deaths!"
"You don't say? Well, then we ought to figure out a way to escape before he has a chance to do so."
"And how do you plan to do that?"
"Haven't figured it out yet. No worries, though. We have at least twelve hours before Mordreth's parade. We should have plenty of time to figure out how to get out of here."
"Only twelve hours! Leo, there is no way to escape Briton dungeons. No way!"
"That's what they said in the dungeons in Fronce, too," said Leo, eating a bite of his gruel. "Now, be quiet while I think. And eat up! We'll need our strength. Prison food may be lousy, but it's what we have. No use complaining!"
"Dungeons in Fronce?" Gavin squeaked.
"Yes, now those were some dungeons. Be quiet."
Gavin fell silent and simply observed his friend, the look on his face (if it had been visible in that dark cell) a mixture of confusion, awe, and horror.
"You wouldn't happen to have fallen in love with any young lady who might be able to arrange a soldier to play traitor and let us go, now would you?" Leo suddenly spoke up.
"No ..."
"Ah, well I suppose not every young lady can be so obliging. And, then again, falling in love with them is as good a way into the dungeon as out. Now, where were we ... no, bribing the guard is out of the question. We have nothing but gruel to call our own, and I'm sure they have much better food in the soldier's quarters.
"There's no way that we'll be able to get out of here!" Gavin moaned.
"That's what you think. That's what everyone thinks. But I tell you, there's always a way out of every sticky situation. You just have to be observant and look for it." Leo frowned as he set his now-empty bowl to the side. "It's too bad that Mordreth doesn't have any pretty daughters for us to charm. Only that good for nothing Kew, and I really do not see him helping us. And Prince Arthur's gone, of course, so that's out of the question."
"If Prince Arthur were here," said Gavin, dryly, "We wouldn't be in the dungeon!"
"Good point," said Leo. "As I was saying, we could always try to steal a key and unlock the door, but that can be very tricky business, and it's very easy to get caught and then where would we be? Probably talking about death sentences some more. Honestly, I don't mind death sentences, it's all this talk of them that annoys me."
- My Kingdom for a Quest

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    The moment that King Harold put a sword in Jyson's hands, he felt at ease. No queens who knew more about yourself than you did yourself, or princesses who look down their noses could be master over him. Not while he held a sword.
    “Well, you certainly have a good stance,” said King Harold, approvingly. “Now, let's see what you can do with it. Tomik?”
    Tomik, the captain of the guard, who would soon be captain over Samul and Jyson, ran towards him, his own sword drawn. Jyson clicked instantly into fight mode, raising his sword to meet Tomik's. He spun away, and made an attack of his own, towards the legs. Tomik blocked it, but barely.
   Taking a step back, he prepared for the next attack, which proved to be a jab towards the stomach. He stepped to the side, out of harm's way, and returned a jab of his own.
   Back and forth they went, neither giving an inch. Jyson could tell he was wearing Tomik down, however. It would only be a matter of time …
   “That is enough!”
   The words cut into his concentration for only a moment, but Tomik took a step back, starting to sheath his sword. Jyson would have none of that, no one should just step down from a fight. He launched himself forward …
    “I said, that is enough!” King Harold's voice thundered.
   This time the words penetrated into his understanding. Almost confused, he turned to the king, unsure what to say … or even if he should say anything at all. Maybe he should see how well he could fight. How …
    “Jy, put down the sword!” Samul's voice trickled in.
Jyson whirled on his cousin, who seemed almost afraid. Perfect. He took a step nearer …
    “No, Jy. Snap out of it! Put the sword down!”
    “Jyson son of Dular,” a third voice floated across the courtyard. A woman's voice. Queen Blanche's. It was gentle, yet commanding. He slowly turned, and saw her standing behind the fence that marked off the area that was designated for weapons practice. “Now is not the time to fight. Save your fire for the true enemy. Do not waste it now. Not with friends.”
Jyson had no choice. He dropped the sword. As it clattered to the ground, he came back to his senses. Sheepishly, he turned to the king. “Uh sorry, sire. I … got carried away.”
    “You are a fighter, Jyson,” said Queen Blanche. “I expected no less of you. Your father would be proud to have a son who walks so close in his footsteps. I know …” she suddenly broke off. Jyson turned back towards her in surprise, and found that the expression she wore was now pained. “No … I mustn’t think of the past,” she whispered. “It is gone.” Her eyes fell onto her hands, which she glared at for a moment before she looked back up. “His father was very known for losing himself in a fight.”
     “I know,” said King Harold, thoughtfully. “He would have made a good soldier but for the fact that he refused to take orders.”
     “He never had to before,” said she.
     “Well, Jyson,” said King Harold, turning back to Jyson. “I think I shall take advantage of your skills, but I do not know how well you will do as part of an army, but it is likely that you will do as poorly as your father did. It may be a while before I find a task suited to your unique talents.” He turned to Tomik. “Now, if you are not too tired, do you mind if I ask you test the skills of his cousin? I hear that he is not quite so … enthusiastic.” He bent down and picked up the fallen sword and handed it to Samul.
     Part of Jyson tried to protest to this – that was his sword! – but he forced himself to stand still. The king could do whatever he wanted to. Right?
     “I think I could handle another fight, now that I have my breath again,” said Tomik. “Shall we begin?” He drew his sword again.
    Samul fought no worse than he usually did, and very little better. Having already had his own fight with Tomik, Jyson had already acquainted himself with the captain's fighting style, so he soon lost interest in the fight, and unconsciously drifted over towards the queen.
     “You fought well.” Her voice suddenly cut into his thoughts, causing him to spin to face her again. “Do not believe for a moment that your skill escaped my notice. I have not seen such a natural fighter in a very long time … and yet your skills are unpolished. Ah, I would that I could gain for you the instructors who taught Stardrana, but I do not know if it is time for them to know of you.”
    “Stardrana?” repeated Jyson. “Who's he?”
   Her mysterious smile only made him more uncomfortable. “One whose future is, I have no doubt, very entwined with yours.”
    “What do you mean?”
    “No questions now,” said she, shaking her head. “For I am not yet permitted to give answer. Hopefully, soon, however all will make sense.” With those words, she turned, her cape billowing around her like a cloud, and walked away.
- 300 Dragons

    “Nay, I shalt not bury thee nor shall I ever!” declared Doranna, staring up at the painting that sat opposite her bed. A painting of Grumadam, the Evil Enchanter, the ugliest man she had ever laid eyes on, and the worst mannered.
    With a sigh, she hopped out of bed and marched over to the painting. She stuck out her tongue at the hideous man, then pulled her chalkboard over to cover him. She knew that it would only last a few hours before it rolled back again, it always did, but she hated having that man's eyes on hers … even if they were only paint.
    Then she walked over and rang a bell for her servant and sighed. After 28,439 days stuck at the top of this mountain, her daily routine was starting to get a little boring … okay, maybe it wasn't starting to. It WAS boring.
    “What would you like to wear today, milady?” asked Maria, entering the room.
    “Oh, how about the growing chest?” she said. “I have a pretty day ahead of me, so I need something radical.”
    “What dost thou plan to do?”
    “Oh, read Fibonacci’s Rabbits for the one thousand and fiftieth time, discover the one hundredth twenty-third place in pi, roam the garter, talk with my birds, and, if I can squeeze it in, boredly watch as quinces try to rescue me.”
    “Ah, thou dost have a busy day ahead of thee! I hope that thou mayest get it all done!”
Doranna sighed. “Well, if I get started at once, I just might!” She glanced at the mirror for a moment, trying to perfect her expression of complete and utter boredom, but instead burst into laughter. Maria soon joined her, shaking her head in amusement.
   “Any other princess,” said Maria, as their mirth died down, “wouldst be in tears after spending … how long has it been? Fifty? Sixty? Seventy years trapped in a castle caught in time. But thou, Princess Doranna, thou art a wonder.”
   “Seventy-seven years and three hundred and three days,” said Doranna, automatically. She sighed. “Verily, it hast been far too long. I tire of my confidence, yet my only other option is unthinkable.”
    “Well, thou never knowest. Today just might be the day that thy true prince gets past the challenges frees thee,” said Maria, encouragingly.
    “Aye, he could,” said Doranna, brightening for a moment. “But after all this time, I begin to think them too impossible. Even Maxie wast unable, despite his immunity to mangoes, and I wouldst have though him a true Quince. Though why he attempted my resurrection is quite beyond me, save that something happened to dear Shira.”
- "Woodcutter Quince"

Melisza was nearly giddy with excitement. “Tonight's the night!” she announced in English, as soon as Tabetha entered her room. “Tonight all of the Lilnia finally find out about us!”
Tabetha's face, as usual, registered no sign of understanding. “Where is the dress which you are to wear tonight, Dizalay?” she asked.
Her friend's stiff attitude dampened her enthusiasm. “On the bed,” said Melisza, still in English.
“Milady?” said Tabetha, in a questioning voice. “I do not understand the human tongue, as you full know. Where is your dress?”
Wincing at her slip, Melisza repeated her words, this time in elvish.
“Oh, Beth, I feel as though I am betraying you,” said Melisza, switching back to English as Tabetha began undoing the fastens on the back of the dress she was wearing. “Here I am, living in the lap of luxury, while you are a servant and little more than dirt!”
Tabetha as usual, did not respond.
“There are days when I wish we could go back to the orphanage,” she continued. “We weren't liked there … but we were friends then. We could be friends. Alistaar doesn't feel the same way … he thinks you're better off here, but … I don't know what's gotten into him. Ever since he found out that he was a Nalish, he's resented ever living among the humans, ever letting you and your brother become close.”
The fastens were all unlatched and Tabetha helped her to step out of the dress. Then the fancy ceremonial dress was pulled over her head.
“He thinks you're better off here as servants, but I …”
“We are,” said Tabetha, suddenly, though in elvish. “Don't fret for us. We have friends among the Harshia now, and our work isn't too hard.”
Melisza turned to face her friend, blinking in surprise. “But …”
“Do not let your thoughts dwell on my brother and me,” said Tabetha, shaking her head. “We are cursed Harshia, and not worth your notice. You are the Dizalay, and your thoughts must be for the bettering of the Lilnia.”
Melisza wanted to tell Tabetha that she was wrong, but the girl's face was so set, so sure. Her gaze fell to her hands as she fidgeted with the embellishments of her dress. “I just …”
“If I am not stepping beyond my place,” continued Tabetha, and Melisza caught a slight tremble in her voice. “I would ask that you please stop speaking in English. You live among the Lilnia now, and should forget the humans. Besides, it makes it harder for me to serve you.”
Melisza opened her mouth, but Tabetha had turned away. “You are ready, Dizalay. The Lilnia await your announcement.”
As if Tabetha had planned it, the door opened at that moment, and in walked Liya, all smiles. “Ah, what a wonderful day it is today, granddaughter!” she said, triumphantly. “At long last, the Lilnia will see again that Elonodi does smile upon them.”
Melisza forced a smile. “Yes, tonight.”
“Nervous, dear?” said Liya, brushing the backs of her fingers against Melisza's cheek. “I suppose that's understandable. You're not used to the crowds yet. But keep your chin up, it shan't be as bad as you think.” She turned to Tabetha, “That's all, Harshan. You may return to your quarters.”
Tabetha, who had been standing, still as a statue, hands folded in front of her, eyes fixed on the floor, snapped to attention, bowed slightly, then left the room. Melisza swallowed. Her best friend was gone for good. Oh, why did the Harshia have to be cursed?
- The New Division.

Friday, August 9, 2013

Actually Finishing Something in July 2.5

I know this over a week late, but I've been busy with my worldbuilding posts and making myself a sword. Excuses aside, here is my last post for the Actually Finishing Something in July Challenge.



Did you reach your goal?

Well, I did get quite a bit of editing done on The Ankulen, but I didn't have a cover art until a few days ago, and I'm working on the back right now. I don't know when I'll be able to convince my dad to let me order a proof copy though .

On the other projects ... well ... for the most part, they're all still right where they were the last time I did one of these posts. *ducks head in shame* no, I haven't been having a good writing week, why do you ask?

If you didn't fully complete your goal, were you able to make a good amount of progress in your project? 

See above.

What was the most difficult part of finishing something this July?

Gumption. It's hard to write when it's 101 degrees outside. 

Did you maintain a writing schedule? How often did you write to meet your goal?

Me? Writing schedules? Ehh ... I wrote whenever I pulled up the document. 

List some of the musical tracks/artists you listened to most frequently this July. Tell us why they inspired you and how they fit with your story.

As I've said before, I don't really listen to music. However, Jenny Freitag posted some of the songs that she has been listening to for her latest novel ... and one of them, King and Lionheart, is almost perfect for Clara and Andrew of Water Princess, Fire Prince, especially for the scene I wrote this week. I don't care much for the lead girl's voice, truthfully, but most of the lyrics fit Clara and Andrew.

Other than that ... well, I ran across the soundtrack for The Hobbit on YouTube, so I've been listening to that, too.

Snippets! Share as much, or as little, as you choose.

Since I didn't write very much during the last few weeks, and I don't want to share anymore of The Ankulen, (It'll be out in less than a month. Be patient and soon you'll have the whole thing!) I'm going to share a few snippets from a project I attempted to start at the beginning of the month, namely 300 Dragons. I let it fall to wayside because I realized that I needed to divert more attention to The Ankulen and Bookania, and I discovered that I began in the wrong place, but that can be fixed. Later. Anyways, I did write some good stuff there.

 “Do you think King Hubert is going to prefer you or me me?” Samul asked, flashing Jyson a grin over the stable partition as they saddled their horses. “Because frankly, I don't see how he's going to resist my charming manners.”
Jyson shook his head as he tightened the girth. “If he can get past your pretentious attitude, I think you'll do just fine.”
“It's part of my charm, Jy,” said Samul. “Now you, I really don't know what you have to recommend yourself – unless he's interested in broody young knights given to violent bursts and obsessed with keeping their hands smooth.”
“You never know,” said Jyson, frowning momentarily at his gloved hands. “I've heard that King Hubert can be quite the broody man himself. We might find that we have much in common.”

Stardrana slid out of her dress and laid the bulky thing on the bed, then turned to the trunk that lay at the foot. Drawing a key from around her neck, she opened it and pulled out a tunic and a pair of trousers. “Yes, but according to my father's people, this is men's clothing.”
“Among the royalty, yes,” agreed her mother. “But you yourself tell me that plenty of the common folk dress practically when the need arises.”
“Aye, but they don't hunt,” she said, as she slid into the clothing and pulled out her leather armor. “And they especially don't hunt what I hunt.”
“They do not need to,” said her mother. “Their curse is different than ours.”

Then the wyrm's eyes went glassy and it stopped moving.
“Fun!” exclaimed Bark.
“Not fun. Dead. Duh – EH – duh. Dead.”
Bark just hissed before she ran over and tackled Aoril. “Fun!”

Pick a character from your July writing project and describe his or her daily wardrobe. Imagine how this character would dress is he or she were living in the year 2013. 

I believe I shall pick a character from 300 Dragons, since I am already talking about it, namely the lead lady, Stardrana. She leads two lives, that of her father's people and that of her mother's, and dresses appropriately for each.

As you may have gathered from the snippet, when among her mother's people, she wears trousers and a simple tunic, over which she places her leather armor. She wears sturdy boots, and her hair is done sensibly in a braid down her back. Her people hunt the Wyrmen, the fallen dragons, so this is quite a necessary thing. Often, but not always, she will wear sturdy leather gloves.

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However, among her father's people she plays the part of a noblelady, and dresses appropriately. She wears long dresses made of sumptuous silks and satins, often gold or blue because those colors best set off her eye and hair color. Her boots are exchanged for dainty slippers, and she wears her hair down or elaborately done by a maid. She'll still wear gloves often enough, but dainty silk ones.

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If she lived in modern day, she'd probably be the girl who wears a leather biker's jacket over a fancy dress. She's comfortable in both lives (the only reason that she resents her father's is that no one there knows that she sneaks out to hunt Wyrmen), and her clothing reflects that.

Bonus Question (skip if so desired--I shan't be offended)! What was your favorite part of Actually Finishing Something [in] July? What could be done next year to improve the challenge?

I enjoyed reading everyone else's, and answering the questions. I love answering questions.

Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Memorable Worlds: Mythology

Mythology

My Experience with this World: 

Today's world is not so much a world, but all the mythology of different cultures. Egyptian, Greek/Roman, Norse, Aztec, Native American ... and so on, so forth.

My experience with mythology goes back almost as far as my experience with Fairy Tales, and I got to study it for school! I've spent the most amount of time with Egyptian and Greek/Roman (the two have much in common, so I consider them to be basically different sides of the same coin) but I do know quite a bit about the others, too. Of course, my mom always made sure I knew that this stuff wasn't true, and just stories people made up to explain away the true God.

Origins:

Every culture had a different story for origins, but the most common theme is a earth goddess married to the sky god, and then their kids come between them and they are forced to separate. Sometimes one of them is even killed. (Usually the sky guy) There's always the origin of man and evil ... usually because of the woman. And then every culture had it's flood story ... some of which were pretty weird.

Geography:

The geography of the mythology depended on the geography of the people who developed it. It usually involves the basic lay of their own land ... with random clapping rocks and bottomless caves stuck in odd places.

Peoples and Culture:

Again, this depended on the culture of the people who developed it. It usually had some form of gods, but whether they ran around wielding hammers or lightening bolts, or if they had forty arms or the head of an eagle varied. Beyond the gods there were nymphs, dragons, serpents, multi-headed dogs named Spot, giants who sweated people out of their armpits ... big blue oxen ... it varied. 

What I like about this world:

The variety ... and the fact that I can take any piece of it and no one can question me about it.

What I don't like:

Most (if not all) of mythology is pagan and is man's attempt to live without the true God, so I have to be choosy. None of any of the actual gods will make their way into any of my books, though I may tweak some of their stories. Also, some of those so called "deities" didn't exactly honor their wedding vows. (And some stories can be quite gruesome)

What I learned from this world: 

It's not so much what I've learned, but what I've stolen. It's mostly in Bookania, but you know the Cloud Sprites? One of them is named Echo and her story is similar to the Greek myth "Echo and Narcissus." Also, Jason and the Argonauts? Two of Robin and Eric's kids will get caught up in that story. I can't wait!

Greek Mythology also wormed its way into The Ankulen, mostly in the form of the Singers who resemble the Muses. Also the Polystoikhedron which is based on the hydra, and there's a Labyrinth that used to have a minotaur in it. I'll have to write up that story someday.

300 Dragons (Which unfortunately needs a new title ... I'll talk more about that when this is over) will probably have some mythology, too, since there is a people group there that is incapable of death, and thus perfect fodder for playing around with the god myths. 

These world-building posts are for the promotion of the upcoming release of my book The Ankulen. Feel free to do one yourself, just make sure you refer back to my blog and let your readers know about my upcoming book. If you do write a post, post a link in a comment somewhere on my blog and I'll add you to a giveaway for a copy of my book. Multiple entries are allowed (Nay - encouraged!), and one out of every three may be a world of your own.

On another note, I finally have the cover art for The Ankulen! However, I'm not going to reveal it until the fifteenth (It's agony for me, too, trust me), but I would like to know if any of my fellow bloggers would like to participate. If so, email me (my address is on my FAQ page) and on the fourteenth  I'll send you the image, blurb and link to the goodreads page that I'll have set up so that you can post it on the fifteen with me! It'll be such fun! (This'll also mean that you get to see the art a day early.) It's quite pretty and I ended up using my own arms because I couldn't find a good redhead. It's okay though, because of the coloring, it doesn't really matter.

Tuesday, July 16, 2013

T - Trilogy of One

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T - Trilogy of One

You may be asking yourself - why in Bookania is this post entitled Trilogy of One? Isn't that another one of Kendra's WIP's? Isn't she going through The Ankulen? Aren't the two books completely different?

My answers. Yes, yes, and no.

You see, if it wasn't for The Trilogy of One, it's very likely I wouldn't have The Ankulen today. (Or the New Division, but that's another story.)

About four or five years ago, I found the first page of The Nine Gems of Virtue (book 1) on the back of my school list. I had no idea who wrote it, or what it was about ... but the story of the little girl who was having writer's block with a school assignment ... even though she had once been able to craft stories so well ... well it stuck with me. Later, I found out that it was my mom's writing, and convinced her to let me read it the rest of the book ... or at least the six chapters that she had written.

I loved them! I wanted mom to write more!

So ... when my young cousin and I were playing with our new stage (actually, it was part of a fancy mattress, but we weren't complaining) and were trying to come up with a play, I suggested we do my mom's book. I would play Shasta (even though I was now three years too old for the part) and Grub 1 would play Flewder (even though he was about ... sixty or so years young).

And we had the loveliest little start. I was sitting on the stage, my notebook in my lap, and I would be scribbling away most dutifully ... and dutifully tearing out pages and hurling them at the wall ... and then I would hear a knock at my closet door (actually, *cough, cough* the door to the plastic playground castle, but again, we weren't complaining) and I would open it to find the little dwarf, who would inform me that he needed my help, then I would throw some things in my backpack, and we would step through the door ... and ...

Run out of plot.

Okay, truth be known, that was only the first chapter and mom had written five more, but beyond that point, we would need more actors ... and those were a precious commodity in those days (something we did complain about). We had to cut it short.

My message of "Mom, I want to know what happens to Shasta and Flewder next" would have been clear. But ... this was also to entertain, not just for me to embarrass my mom into writing more of her book.

So ... we decided that that would be the prologue into the official play, which would open in a very similar way. I, who was now Jen, would be sitting on the side of a stream, with a notebook in my lap (why waste a perfectly good prop?) with a horrid case of writer's block. Then Grub 1 (now called Chris) would appear, and the two of us will go on a delightful little adventure.

The problem was, now we needed a script.

We never did preform that play, since we could never settle on a good ending that made sense and would work for our very limited repertoire of props and special effects. The idea, however, wouldn't go away, and eventually I started writing a rather different version.

But I'm not done with what The Trilogy of One has to do with The Ankulen.

You see, as I was writing, I discovered that there were other Anka and Anku out there. Jen was not the only person with an Ankulen, not the only person capable of bringing her imagination to life ... and a few of these other Anka and Anku show up in the course of the book. And some of them refer to the books that they are writing.

And since I'm a person who, if she gets and idea, I'll want to write it, I decided to give these Anka and Anku some of my own stories. The two books that are referred to the most are 300 Dragons (basically, whenever you hear a certain redheaded character talking about dragons, she's referring to this book's world) and ... The Trilogy of One. In fact, some of the characters from those two books are seen fleetingly during the climatic chapter!

Oh, and don't forget, I'm going to do an Ankulen-themed vlog, and I still need questions to answer, so ask what thou wilt!
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