Monday, July 28, 2014

Announcing Plenilune!

I follow a number of bloggers and authors, among whom is Jenny Freitag, also known as the Penslayer. She has a historical fiction book, The Shadow Things, which I believe had a lot of influence in shaping the feel of my own The New Division. And since her book had influence on today's book, I deemed it appropriate that her release date announcement for her newest book should fall on it.

The book is called Plenilune, and it's a planetary fantasy - which she says it something like Lewis's Space Trilogy - making me very excited for the story.


October 20th just can't come quickly enough.

The fate of Plenilune hangs on the election of the Overlord, for which Rupert de la Mare and his brother are the only contenders, but when Rupert’s unwilling bride-to-be uncovers his plot to murder his brother, the conflict explodes into civil war.

To assure the minds of the lord-electors of Plenilune that he has some capacity for humanity, Rupert de la Mare as been asked to woo and win a lady before he can become the Overlord, and he will do it—even if he has to kidnap her.

En route to Naples to catch a suitor, Margaret Coventry was not expecting a suitor to catch her. 

I'm thoroughly looking forward to participating in the cover reveal whenever that happens!

Party Game - Hot Potato

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Hot potato. You don't want to hold it for long because it might burn your hands.

A lot of bad things happen in The New Divsion. As of my current planning, it probably won't get a happy ending. (I'm not saying it's got a sad "everyone you love dies" ending, but it won't be a nice neat, everyone lives happily after. I'm not going to pull an Infiltration here ... Miss Melody knows what I'm talking about.). I just don't think it would fit with the story and the message I want to portray.

So, in the spirit of bad things happening, we're going to write a story together. Where nothing goes right.

I'll start it, you guys can take over, and, as per usual, I will draw the name of a random participant and let them read all 18,484 words that I have written in this book. That's a prologue, six whole chapters, and three random words that are grinning at me.

Anyways ...

It was any ordinary day ... except that when I woke up, the sun was missing.

Welcome to Coluna

My concept for the cover. Needs
serious work, and I'm not sure
why the grass is green.
Some of you may be wondering why there weren't any posts yesterday. Here's the simple answer. Life has been fun for me the last few weeks (not to mention a bit stressful), and I did not get all the post pre-scheduled as I had planned to do. And since no one had volunteered to interview any of the BigWigs, and I therefore didn't have any prior commitments, I decided to pull it. And since no one seemed to be online yesterday anyways, I don't regret it.

Today I'm going to talk about The New Division, which is set in the world of Coluna.

This book was inspired by the random idea of a girl who was not allowed to cut her hair for some strange reason. I liked the idea, but it wasn't going anywhere, so I decided to make its goal something Nine Gems related. And while it was a very interesting beginning (and I have some notebook pages that I could probably find with very little trouble), it wasn't going anywhere, and I felt as though it was missing something.

So I threw it into my Rizkaland universe, realized it took place during the Great Depression/WWII era, and made it an elven version of Acts. And the story just bloomed. It's still been slow writing, but at least it's gotten past the beginning stage.

This is one of my most difficult books to write, because I deal with a lot of hard issues. Slavery, racism, antisemitism, idolatry, human sacrifice. It's packed. It also deals with friendship, family, hard work, and teamwork. I can't wait to share it with you guys, but it's been slow writing.

It is certainly one of my darker books, and I see it in a lot of dark blues, greens, blacks, and crimsons. 

It's one of my twin books. I have two cultures built around twins, Mikada, and this one, and this one is, possibly, my favorite. You see, in Coluna, almost everyone is born in a girl/boy twinset, and to be born without a twin is a sign of disgrace. Twins are vital to the culture. Instead of a married couple on their throne, the Lilnia (the plural form of Lilna) have the Nilash and Dizalay (who Alistaar and Melisza turn out to be) and the Harshai have the Koyer and the Takkig (who turn out to be Jaqob and Tabetha). They're marked from birth by special necklaces. Also, twins each select the other's spouse. It's quite sensible, actually. Being twins, they know each other better than anyone else does, and they can view things objectively, and since they know that the other is choosing the life partner for them, they have a vested interest in making sure that they choose the best person possible for the other. If they abuse their power, their twin can do the same. It's very common for them to pick from the same twin set. It makes things easier.

As I've said, I love this world, can't wait to share it, but I don't want to rush it. That would mess it up.

But do swing by Kiri Liz's blog for an interview with Melisza and Tabetha ... And you can check out the mock covers she did - which includes one for The New Division. It doesn't quite fit the book - but it has the right colors ... which is more than you can say for the one I've done.

Saturday, July 26, 2014

An Excerpt from Jessica's Summer

Yesterday, Kathryn posted her entry for the fanfiction contest - her version of Jessica's Summer, which is one of my favorite WIP's that can't seem to get off the ground. Since today is my long day at work, and I don't have the brain power to do up the 12 things post for the Land of the Fallen Rainbow, I decided to share what I have written for this story.

This book does not have it's own document yet, not sure when I'm going to buckle down and actually write it, but I have this document that I call RambleK, where I just write excerpts from various books that I haven't reached yet but want to write. For instance, there are three stories from Bookania (One of them is Madeleine's painting scene in Do You Take This Quest? and another is Shira's meeting with her ORIGINAL love interest, before I got her involved with the Locksley family.), and two from Rizkaland. Then there are some random bits from HaV Academy, Half-Hidden, and Nine Gems of Virtue.

And I have the opening scene for Jessica's Summer. I don't know where I'm going next with it - I got bored with it, but I've decided to share it with you. Enjoy!

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     “Jessica,” called Mrs. McConnald, “Jessica Anne! Where are you?”
     “Up here!” answered Jessica, coming down from her tree house, “What do you want?”
     “I want you to watch your younger sister while I make an important phone call inside,” answered Mrs. McConnald, “Play tag or something.”
     “Tag please, Jessie,” said a very hopeful Gina, “Let's play tag.”
     “Oh, all right,” said Jessica, “You'd better run!” She let Gina stay ahead of her. They might as well have fun. Their mom headed in to make the phone call. Gina ran round and round the yard, Jessica never all that far behind, but letting her stay a few steps ahead.
     It was a hot day, and soon sweat was dripping down Gina's face, but Jessica, strangely enough, was unaffected by the heat. Well, actually, it wasn't all that strange for her. She almost never felt the effects of heat. In fact, for her, the hotter it was, the better she liked it. She was always absolutely miserable in winter.
     Suddenly, Gina turned around, and gasped. “Jessie!” she exclaimed, “Your hair's on fire!”
    “What?” said Jessica, looking at her sister curiously, “My hair is what?”
    “It's on fire!” Gina repeated, just staring at Jessica as if she had just grown another head.
    “It doesn't feel any different from usual,” said Jessica, confusion clear in her voice and face. She put her hand to her head and pulled one of her dark brown curls from her ponytail to where she could see it. The ponytailer snapped and her hair fell down onto her shoulders. Sure enough, little orange and red tongues of flame licked all through it.
    “Stop drop roll!” ordered Gina. Jessica frantically followed her sister's advice. When she stood up, the grass was now on fire, and now Jessica's shirt, too.
    “Jessica!” cried a strange voice that was somehow quiet and commanding at the same time. It definitely had an English accent. Jessica turned to see two girls running towards her.
    “Who are you?” Jessica asked, despite the fact that she was now in the center of a bunch of flames, “and how do you know my name?”
    “Stop the joke Jessica,” said one of the girls, the one with waist-length black hair, almost-white skin and piercing blue eyes. She was wearing a shimmery blue shirt and a shimmery white skirt. She had not been the one to speak first, for her accent was low, thick, and mysterious, but not without command, “Or do I need to cool you off. I don't want the ice caps to melt, you know.”
    “The what?” said Jessica, “This is Texas. I don't think we could affect the ice caps from here.” She looked down to realize that the flames had by now burned away all of her clothes, but had woven themselves into a dress, that flickered and popped, but was actually quite comfortable.
     “Who is this girl, Jessica?” asked the other girl. She had knee-length blond curls, rosy cheeks, and soft blue-green eyes. She was wearing a pink shirt and a grass green skirt. She was the one with the quiet, English accent.
     “My sister,” said Jessica, bristling.
    “She is not,” said the girl with the blue and white. She bent and kissed Gina on the forehead, then Gina’s eyes went glassy, and she fell stiffly to the ground.
     “What did you do to her,” Jessica cried, the flames flicked hotter, although Jessica didn’t notice.
     “Tabitha,” said the other girl at the same time, “that is uncalled for.”
     “I didn’t kill her,” said Tabitha, with a roll of her eyes, “But she’s human, and it is dangerous to have humans alert when we are around.” She turned her attention to Jessica, and added, “Now for you.” She walked towards Jessica, and where she stepped, the flames spluttered and died away. When she reached Jessica, she put out her hand touched her hair. Suddenly, all the flames, other than the ones that had turned into a dress, flickered and died. The ones in the dress merely froze, turning into pretty much regular red dress. Tabitha’s dress, Jessica noticed, dulled, and stopped shimmering.
      She took her hand away. Her face was flushed.
     “How did you do that?” Jessica asked, shivering. Tabitha had cold hands!
     “How did you start the fire?” asked Tabitha simply, “You used to know, but it appears that something has happened to your memory.”
     “What do you mean?” asked Jessica.
     “Jessica what has happened,” the blond girl cried, frantically.
     “Who are you?” Jessica repeated, “How do you know my name? Why did my hair suddenly catch on fire? What did you do to Gina? What is going on?”
      “You used to know,” said Tabitha.
      “I am Clara,” said the blond girl, “and she is Tabitha. We know your name because we have known each other for most of our lives. Your hair, probably because you over heated. Gina, is that the girl? Tabitha kissed her. And we would like the answer to the last question just as much as you.”
      “What do you mean, I used to know?” asked Jessica.
     “Yesterday,” said Clara, apparently choosing her words carefully, “the four of us were together, Sara was with us too, still. Then Tabitha and I were separated from you and Sara, and when we began to look for the two of you, we realized that the two of you had been separated. We looked for her first, and only found her necklace. We then looked for you, and find you with no memory.”
      “We need to go talk to Mother,” said Tabitha urgently, “And we need to go now.”
      “Agreed,” said Clara, “But with Jessica lacking her memory, this could be complicated.”
      “I know,” said Tabitha, rolling her eyes.
      “I told Mom I would watch Gina while she made an important phone call,” argued Jessica, “I don’t think she’ll be happy about her current state when she finds out about it.”
     “I will take care of this girl,” said Clara, bending over and kissing the girl, “as my kiss is life, not ice.”
     Gina stirred and looked around herself. “Jessie,” she said, “I’m so cold. What happened?”
      “I’d like to know that myself,” said Jessica.
     “You must stay here,” said Tabitha, “sit on the doorstep of your home. We must go to our mother to speak of very important things. You must stay here, and you will never be able to learn of what transpired, as it is not good for you comprehend it. It is beyond your knowledge.”
      “What of Jessie?” said Gina.
      “Jessica is not your sister,” said Clara, “She must come with us. Very well, we will stay and watch you until your mother comes, but you will not see us.”
      “Why not?” asked Gina.
      “We are going to turn invisible,” said Clara, “Or at least, we will become as humans can’t see or hear us.”
      “Who are you?” asked Gina, looking at Clara and Tabitha in confusion.
      “It is not for you to know that either,” said Clara.
Jessica looked down at the charred ground that was around her. “How did I do this?” she asked, still not sure what had just transpired.
      “You probably overheated,” said Tabitha, “I wish you hadn’t of, we have just seriously imbalanced the earth’s temperatures, and Mother really doesn’t like it when we do that.”
      “How did you do that?” asked Gina.
      “Is there any way we can make this girl be quiet?” asked Tabitha, “She asks entirely too many questions.” She turned to Jessica and added, “So do you. You should know everything we are telling you, or at least most of it. You should not be here, making our task harder. This had better not be a joke, or Mother will be most angry.”
     “Who is Mother?” asked Jessica.
     “We can’t tell you that now,” said Clara, “Not with this girl here. Tabitha, show Jessica how to get home. I will follow quite shortly.”
     “I am home,” said Jessica.
     “No, you’re not,” said Tabitha with a definite tone of annoyance.
     “Yes I am,” said Jessica.
     “No, you’re not,” said Tabitha, “and we are not going to have this argument. It is merely wasting time we don’t have. Let’s go.”
     “Go where?” said Jessica, her hot temper flaring, and she heard a popping in her hair, as if it were catching on fire again.
    “Home,” said Tabitha simply, her voice now seemed filled with ice. Her hair straightened, and stiffened as frost crept through it, “Grab your necklace, close your eyes, and take a step backwards.”
Jessica put her hand to her throat, fingering the sun charm that hung there.
    “Good,” said Tabitha, “Now close your eyes and take a step backwards.”
    “What is happening to your hair?” Jessica asked.
    “Don’t worry about it,” said Tabitha, “I will explain later. Close your eyes and take a step backwards.” Hoarfrost rose out of the ground around her feet, and her shirt and shirt began to shimmer again. Jessica’s dress turned back into flame.
    “What is happening?” asked Gina, looking at Jessica and Tabitha with fear in her eyes.
    “Oh,” said Clara, “It’s normal. The two of them have been fighting for years. Nothing new at all. Although, usually, it’s not with Jessica minus her memory. Jessica, please do what Tabitha asks. We won’t hurt you, we promise.”
    “What are you planning to do with me?” demanded Jessica.
    “Nothing that you have never done before,” said Tabitha.
    “What are you doing!”
    “You are melting the artic,” said Tabitha.
    “What are you talking about?” asked Jessica, truly bewildered.
    “Please, Jessica,” said Clara. “Please, close your eyes and take a step backwards. You have done it plenty of times before, and if it were going to hurt you, I’m sure it would have already, but as it hasn’t, I would assume that it is quite safe for you. Tabitha and I will do the same as soon as you leave.”
     Jessica stared at the ground indecisively for a minute, then finally did as she was being asked. After all, what could it hurt?
     She didn’t expect for there to be no ground under her feet and for her to be falling. Her eyes flew open, as did her mouth to let out a scream. She was falling through the air, nothing save the clouds she zoomed past to be seen. Oh, and Tabitha and Clara were there, too, also falling. They seemed much calmer, though. Tabitha also seemed annoyed.
    “Use your wings,” Tabitha said, icily.
    “My … wings?” questioned Jessica. She glanced over her shoulder as best she could hurtling who-knows-how-fast through the air, and let out a gasp as she caught sight of something red and flame-like sticking out of her back. “I have wings!” she exclaimed, in a mix of amazement and horror.
   “Yeah,” said Tabitha, “flap them.”
   “Flap …” muttered Jessica. She tried flexing her shoulders … that didn’t work … uh …
   “Come on!” exclaimed Tabitha.
   “I’m trying!” exclaimed Jessica, glancing down and noticing that ground was rapidly approaching. She squeezed her eyes shut to block the impending doom. Before she could collide with the earth, she felt Tabitha and Clara grab her and her descent stopped almost instantly. Clara’s touch was much warmer than Tabitha’s, but still not as warm as Jessica preferred.

The Elder Elf and the Nine Gems of Virtue, Chapter 1

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This is mom's opening chapter to the book. I had every intention of posting my own version of the first chapter, but I'm not quite done with it, and it's in a notebook to boot, and I don't have time to type it up. So you have mom's version. Which is good, but not quite as good as mine. (I've had much more fictional writing experience, and I have discovered more about the plot than she knew then, so I've been able to foreshadow more.) And why is there an "Elder Elf" in the title? Well, that's mom's original title. I shortened it.

Anyways, enjoy!

Chapter 1


It’s useless,” muttered Shasta, crumpling up her sheet of paper and tossing it into a corner where it bounced off the growing pile of discarded paper and careened across the cluttered floor.
Shasta crossed her bony arms across her thin chest and stuck out her lower lip. “It’s a stupid assignment really,” she said. She kicked the leg of her desk and shoved her bangs out of her eyes.
She had loved the assignment when her sixth grade English teacher had told them about it that morning. It had seemed so simple, write a short story about visiting a fictitious location. Finally she was doing something in school that she understood and was really good at doing. She had loved the idea then, but now, two hours after school, she was frustrated. Making up a story was harder than she had thought it was going to be, and a lot harder than it use to be. She glanced at the huge pile of discarded attempts at a story beginning and sighed.
She pushed herself away from her desk and stared down at her crooked legs. Standing, she once again flung her foot in the direction of her desk leg. She winced with the sudden pain and then flung herself onto her bed and cried. Venting her frustration with her tears, she beat her pillow with a tightly clinched fist until she could do no more than sniffle. “Why do I have to be so different?” she cried, and buried her face in her pillow, fresh tears streaming down her face.

Shasta had once been able to tell all kinds of stories. She had spent much of her childhood in the hospital. Her legs had been useless when she was born. Her doctor had not been very positive about her walking. He had felt that maybe she could walk with braces someday, but she would spend most of her life in a wheel chair. Her parents had been determined to give her the chance, and so she had gone to the hospital for her first operation only days after her second birthday.
It had taken many operations before she had been able to begin learning how to walk, first with braces and crutches and then finally two years ago, she had walked alone. Learning to walk had been dreary and painful, but she had never lost sight of her goal and had never given up. Now she could run. She had spent her time in therapy and conditioning telling the nurses stories to help her forget the pain. Her stories had been wild and entertaining. The nurses had enjoyed working with her because of them. Now, however, she had trouble putting two words together, let alone a whole sentence.
Sixth grade had been her first year in a real school. She had always been home schooled before, when she could not walk, when she was in the hospital. School had been out of the question because she was in the hospital so much. She had been so excited when she had discovered that she would be able to “go to school” for the first time. “Real school” had been a great disappointment to her. She loved her teachers, but the other students were so cruel.
She was not a pretty child. She had plain brown hair that was too thin and too straight. Her face and ears were strangely shaped, almost elfish. She had pale green eyes, too large for her small face, pale skin, and a painfully skinny figure from the years spent in the hospital. Her legs were covered with scars and were still oddly shaped, even after so many operations and so much time in therapy. She was terrible at sports, and could not understand most of the games since she had never played any of them. Who plays kickball in the hospital ward for crippled and critically ill children? So the other children refused to associate with her, and often teased her openly. She had soon lost her confidence in herself and her ability to achieve, and along with it went her ability to tell stories.

Suddenly, Shasta jerked upright. Had she been asleep, she wondered. What had woken her up? She glanced around the room and then at her clock. Six-thirty, her mother would be home in half an hour. She had to get dinner started or her mother would be upset. Stretching and rubbing her eyes, Shasta managed to get to her feet.
She was almost to the door when she heard it again, someone had knocked on a door. She glanced in the direction of the front door, puzzled. No, the sound had come from ... from her room she realized with sudden fear.
Who’s there?” she asked, her voice shaking in fear.
She heard the knock again, it was coming from her closet!
Trembling, she edged her way over to the door and flung it open. There stood a little boy – no, it wasn’t a boy, it was a little man.
He must have escaped from a circus,” she thought, glancing down at the strangely dressed man.
His clothes looked like they had come from one of her story books about old England. He wore a red pointed hat with red and turquoise feathers sticking in the top. He had on a brown shirt and a red vest, turquoise pants and strange brown boots, obviously homemade. He had a large round face, small black eyes, a very large nose, and a wart on his left cheek. His face and hands were like leather. His hands were small and fat, she wondered how he used such small hands. He was half as wide as he was tall, and as he removed his hat, she noticed that his dark black hair was pulled back into a pony tail, and would have been considered much too long by her mother’s standards. He was a perfect little dwarf, just like the ones pictured in her books.
I’m Flewder,” he said, and offered her his hand.
Gingerly she took it and replied, “Shasta.”
Yes, I know,” he replied. His voice was deep and gravelly. “I’ve come to take you back with me. You are our last hope.”
How did you get in my closet?” she demanded, before what he had said set in.
The great Wizard Homgloff opened a door from my world to yours. It can only be open for a minute, or the Quaglarks will know and will destroy the portal.”
Why me?” She felt strange at the thought of being “the last hope” for anyone.
You are the chosen. You know how to save our world.”
Shasta very much doubted that she could help, she had no special talents, but the thought of travel intrigued her, and there was still that writing assignment to do. “I’ll need to pack a few things, if I’m to be of any help anyway,” she stammered, trying to buy time to consider her options. Surely this was just a dream, and soon she would wake up.
Of course,” agreed Flewder. “I will return to the wizard for now, but I will return here in twenty of your minutes.” He pulled the door shut.

Shasta stood stunned for a second, then jerked the door back open. Just a closet. She sighed in relief, then she noticed the turquoise feather lying in her shoe. “He was real!” she shouted. A big grin spread across her face.
Grabbing her backpack, Shasta dumped her books onto her desk. She stuffed a pair of jeans, two T-shirts, and a sweatshirt inside, then grabbed her jacket and boots. She laid it all on her bed and glanced around the room. From the pile on her desk, she grabbed several pens and a new spiral notebook and tossed them on the bed with the rest of the stuff. Digging in her drawers, she found a canteen and a compass from her hiking trip last summer, and changes of socks and underwear. She tossed her findings on the bed and considered her options.
Dashing down the hall, she raced to her parents room and retrieved a small pair of high powered binoculars and her father’s hunting knife. She hesitated only a second before also taking his new underwater watch, it was very fancy and could do a lot more than tell time, she hastily fastened it to her wrist. Stopping in the bathroom on her way back, she grabbed her toothbrush, toothpaste, and a small first aide kit. She licked her lips and glanced at her own wrist watch. She had already used up nearly ten minutes.
She dumped her new treasures on her bed and raced to the kitchen. Grabbing a plastic shopping bag, she stuffed beef jerky, fruit, some juice boxes and a few other things into it, including matches, a flashlight, and extra batteries. She paused as she started out the door, and then grabbed some chicken and put it in the oven for her mother’s supper. Then she took pen and paper and wrote her mom a note.
Mom, Don’t worry. Gone through the closet to somewhere else. Be back soon. Love, Shasta.” She placed the note under the salt shaker and placed the feather beside it. She grabbed her bag of food and dashed up the stairs.
Back in her room, Shasta worked frantically to get everything ready to go. She stuffed her things into her backpack and tied the boots and canteen to it. She was buckling the last strap as she once again heard the knock on her closet door.
For an instant she froze in fear, her arms and legs seemed made of lead. What did she think she was doing anyway? What was that saying her mother had? “Never talk to or go anywhere with a stranger - unless he knocks at your closet door.” Did she know? Impossible.
Swallowing her fear, she flung open her closet door. Once again the little man was there. “Are you ready?” he asked solemnly.
Shasta nodded.
We must be very silent, and move very quickly” whispered Flewder.

Shasta nodded again. With hands that she could barely force to work, she picked up her chosen items, put on the backpack, and stepped into the closet with Flewder. Glancing around the room once more, she let out a deep breath and closed the door.
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