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Sunday, May 13, 2018
The Mothers in my Writing
Happy mother's day! Everyone, do me a favor and go give your mother a huge hug for me. Kay? Kay. And your Grandmothers, too, if you can manage it. I lost my Grandmother on mother's day, nine years ago.
But, sad stuff aside, let's talk about fictional mothers. Particularly the mother's in my own writing. (I'll feature the mothers in my favorite books by other people next year, kay?) It seems to be a trend in fiction, especially in fantasy, to kill off the mothers, but I like to rebel against that. Mothers are awesome people, see. And the good ones know to let their children go off and adventure. I've killed off a few, but, for the most part, they're all alive and kicking.
So, yeah, let's get started. In no particular order and with no number cap.
Isa: Let's start off with Clara's mom in Water Princess, Fire Prince. You only see her in one scene at the end of the book, but she's such a core part of Clara's character that I can't help but mention her (especially as she plays a much larger role in Love and Memory. I need to finish writing that.). She's a woman who wanted a large family, but due to an accident in her teens, ends up with only Clara - and ten miscarriages. She's a woman based on my mother and paternal grandmother, and, oh, she hurts my heart so much.
Maid Marian: Let's hop over to Bookania now to talk about this lovely lady. While she is a mother in her own right, where she shines is in her mentor relationship with Robin. See, she does see Robin as her daughter (for spoiler reasons). And Robin very much benefits from a positive relationship with an older woman.
Andrew: Wait, what? A guy? Why am I putting a guy on a list of mothers??? Okay, hush. I'm just saying that this fellow deserves an honorable mention for stepping up after he lost his mother in a car accident (see, I DO have a few maternal casualties), and was mom to his three younger brothers. At twelve. Poor boy.
Petra: Oh, you guys haven't really read her as a mother, but let me just say, the mother-daughter relationship that develops between her and Laura is beautiful. And she does have children of her own, and she's a wonderful mother to them, too.
Robin: Again, you guys haven't read her as a mother yet but readers of the revised Do You Take This Quest? know that she has adopted a whole orphanage of children (her new husband ran the place), and readers of My Kingdom for a Quest know that their own is on the way. And, let me just say, motherhood looks very good on Robin. Really mellows her out and gives her a direction in life.
Erika: Aka, the Eternal Queen. I haven't finished writing this book - I've barely started writing it, but her relationship with her granddaughter has been fun thus far, especially since she's physically younger than her granddaughter (due to the cyclical nature of her life). And I'm very much looking forward to writing the resolution of her relationship with her own mother.
Rintaya: This is a woman whose baseline of her personality is "mother." She's Ashna's stepmother in Lady Dragon, Tela Du, and Ashna really scores with her stepmother. A very kind, understanding woman ... who may or may not be hiding some pretty interesting secrets.
Emily: Aka, Jen's mom in The Ankulen. I don't know if I've ever mentioned her by name before. But she's a dear lady, who, like Isa, wanted a large family but only ended up with just one daughter. She chose the route of adoption, though that ... turned out interesting. Oh, but her backstory's sad.
Queen Blanche: Stardrana's mother in Half-Hidden, and another character for whom "mother" is the baseline of her personality. She would sacrifice anything for her children - and has. Ah, but her story's so tragic, and I really can't wait to share it with all of you.
Queen Tailya: One of Jen's imaginary friends in The Ankulen - to whom was given children before a husband. Yeah ... kid logic isn't always the soundest.
Queen Camilla: Eric's mother in Bookania. She was never the prettiest of women, and her husband is ... shallow. So, once she'd provided him with his heir and spare, was pretty much left alone. Pretty much the source of most of the good parts of Eric's character. Such a dear woman.
And ... there's my list. There are some others that I have in my WIP's who I didn't mention, including several who are negative influences (Queen Charlotte, Queen Adelaide), but I'm going to stop here. This is a good list.
Tuesday, February 7, 2017
Birthday Happy, Me!
Anywho, it's my birthday. *tosses confetti* (If anyone wants to get me a gift, I accept donations towards paying for my computer. Don't feel obligated. You could also send me random bits of writing to kendraeardnek@gmail.com)
To celebrate, I'm going to make a list of 22 of my WIP's that I can't wait to write and get into your hands. No particular order. Enjoy!
1. Bookania #5. This is the book where Maryanne first gets to really shine, and the book where Rapunzel shows up. In fact, the title may be related to Rapunzel. It might also be related to Meg, who gets the main romance in this book. I'm especially looking forward to writing the proposal scene(s). I'll have you guys rolling.
2. Half-Hidden. Readers of the Ankulen know of a certain redhead whose father wrote stories about dragons. Well, Half-Hidden is that story. I crack into some heavy topics, and the world building is awesome. This won't be a kids' book, though, and I may be rating it as New Adult, instead of YA like my other writing.
3. Love and Memory. The third book of the Rizkaland Legends. I know that all of you are looking forward to this story ... but boy is it breaking my heart right now. My poor characters. But it's gonna be awesome, too. You guys will probably place me firmly within the ranks of evil authors for this story ... even without killing half the cast.
4. Bookania #6. This book has pirates. And Cinderella. And the Odessey. And the Merchant of Menace. This is one story you guys won't want to miss.
5. Rizkaland #5. While I do like the story of book 4, and you won't want to skip that book - it's the center of the series for a reason, book 5 is the one I'm really looking forward to writing. Convoluted timeline, finding out what happened to a certain character's mother, Clara's Chinese heritage coming in handy ... it's going to be awesome.
6. ROCKS. The first volume of my Superhero Dystopia trilogy. This world is so much fun to write, and I love the subversions it places on its genres. Also, it has such a dynamic cast of characters. Everyone has a story, and the stories are all so interestingly interconnected. Also, Roxanne might get to rule the world. We're currently negotiating the details.
7. Bookania #8. This is a bit of an "It's a Wonderful Life" story. It'll star Robin, and everything'll get turned on its head. I'm looking forward to this. Not a nice alternate world, though. If this were the actual timeline, I wouldn't need Love and Memory to push me into the ranks of evil authors.
8. Sing, Aling. One of my contributions to my sister's sci-fi series, this is a sci-fi retelling of Peter Pan, focusing on the Tinkerbelle character, Aling. The story is turned completely on its head, as Peter and Wendy are established recurring characters throughout the series, and this sprang from my asking the question of "hey, how does Tink factor in?"
9. The Worth of a King. This is the book that Jack and I were writing together, but Jack had to bail on and I'm now rewriting it on my own. Don't miss out, though, because it features an intense cast of characters, awesome worldbuilding, a twisting plot, lots of political drama that leads to relationship drama, and Amber and Granite before Amber took up the Dragon Scale. Yes, a GOOD Amber. I can't wait to write her.
10. Bookania #10. You know how Robin always wanted to run away from home but could never muster the courage? Her daughter doesn't have that problem.
11. Rizkaland #6. The only timeline more convoluted than 5's is 6's. Andrew's younger brother, Kyle, and Kevin's younger sister, Tina, are the main characters. And Tina might have a crush on Andrew. And according to the people scouring my Pinterest board, there are babies involved.
12. The Nine Gems of Virtue. Like Half-Hidden, this story belongs to a secondary character in The Ankulen. I've also stolen this story from my mother. Diverse characters, creative worldbuilding. incredible plot twists. And did I mention that the "Nine Gems" are based on the fruit of the Spirit?
13. Bookania #12. This book ... will involve Maryanne trying to make a new friend ... but instead triggering a curse and she and some of her other friends will have to venture into the unknown parts of Bookania and comfront their worst fears in order to break the curse. It's gonna be awesome, especially the part with the wolves and a certain girl in a red hood.
14. Jessica's Summer. This is an interesting story about a girl who becomes Summer. As in, the season. Yeah, it's gonna be awesome.
15. Bookania #14. This one is a revisit to the alternate timeline of book #8. This time, but a different character. It's going to be great.
16. Rizkaland #7. JEJS. The final book of the series. I have five deaths confirmed for this book. You will cry. You have been warned.
17. The Eternal Queen. This story is mentioned in LDTD, and it will be awesome and intense. And you might find a plot twist involving Laura. You'll love it.
18. Bookania #16. This is probably the ... fourth Bookania plot that I came up with. It mostly involves a Greek myth and Arthurian Legend. Stay tuned.
19. Shut the Door. This is Lucy's story. Yes, the same Lucy that Laura mentioned both in WPFP and LDTD. I was plotting around with the climax and ... it was intense. (And this is one of the annoying stories that have been bothering me with the lack of title, and I just came up with this beauty, and I'm just going to leave all of you guessing as to what it means)
20. Bookania #19. I was talking with a friend about this one the other day. This is my Twelve Dancing Princesses retelling. It's based off of the French version, rather than the Grimm, and may involve a subtle commentary on substance abuse. And grief, love, and what happens when the Happily Ever After crashes and burns. (Also, the fox shows up in this book ... I can't wait to introduce all of you to the fox)
21. Fire and Song. This one came from a random song that I woke up with one day, which I think was vaguely inspired by Frozen. It involves birds and fire. And it's going to be awesome.
22. Infiltration. This book serves as a sort-of bridge between my Rizkaland multiverse and my sisters Sci-fi system. It's inspired by Hobbits, and the plot by an element of the Left Behind series (not the rapture part, but the mark part). How would we behave if there was a physical mark on true believers? Also herbs. I love herbs.
And there we go. Any of these that you're particularly lookign forward to? Anything on my WIP list that you think that I missed?
Happy Birthday, everyone!
(Oh, and I'm looking forward to letting all of you read the edited version of Sew, it's a Quest. I can't believe that Younger Kendra published that mess.)
Friday, January 16, 2015
Dragons in my Writing
Here I am, back with another post. I don't know why, but I've been in a bloggy mood this month.
Anyways, I discovered yesterday that today is National Dragon's Appreciation day, which was began by Donita K. Paul, an author whose work I really need to read. And naturally, I have to take part and do something to appreciate dragons.
I could read about them (would be a good reason to finally finish reading Eregon, which has been sitting on my shelf for two years now), but you guys know me. I've got to take it to the next level. I have to write about them.
As Tolkien once said, a story isn't a story if there aren't dragons in it, so naturally I've included them in pretty much every world I've built, in some form or fashion. I have good dragons, I have evil dragons, and I have dragons that can go either way. I have intelligent dragons who can understand, even speak English, and I have dragons who are as dumb as they get.
Allow me to give you the guided tour.
First of all, Everyone's favorite Bookania. I think most of you know that it's one of Robin's goals to someday fight a dragon. I'm sorry to disappoint, but unfortunately, to my knowledge, that isn't ever going to happen.
However, that doesn't mean that dragons aren't a huge part of this world. It's fairy tales, remember, and dragons are a huge part of many fairy tales. There will be good dragons and bad dragons, a main character is going to get a pet dragon that she'll ride everywhere. I'm not entirely sure yet if they're intelligent yet. I'm thinking that they are, but only once they've passed about 20 years old, or something like that. I have to work out details.
Anyways, I discovered yesterday that today is National Dragon's Appreciation day, which was began by Donita K. Paul, an author whose work I really need to read. And naturally, I have to take part and do something to appreciate dragons.
I could read about them (would be a good reason to finally finish reading Eregon, which has been sitting on my shelf for two years now), but you guys know me. I've got to take it to the next level. I have to write about them.
As Tolkien once said, a story isn't a story if there aren't dragons in it, so naturally I've included them in pretty much every world I've built, in some form or fashion. I have good dragons, I have evil dragons, and I have dragons that can go either way. I have intelligent dragons who can understand, even speak English, and I have dragons who are as dumb as they get.
Allow me to give you the guided tour.
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However, that doesn't mean that dragons aren't a huge part of this world. It's fairy tales, remember, and dragons are a huge part of many fairy tales. There will be good dragons and bad dragons, a main character is going to get a pet dragon that she'll ride everywhere. I'm not entirely sure yet if they're intelligent yet. I'm thinking that they are, but only once they've passed about 20 years old, or something like that. I have to work out details.
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I think everyone here is aware that the villainess of the first two books of the Rizkaland Legends is the Amber, also known as the Lady Dragon. (And if you didn't, now you do.)
She isn't naturally a dragon, but she possesses a powerful magic that gives her the ability to assume that form.
However, in book 3, I'll introduce other dragons, natural dragons ... who are much, much worse than she is. I'll also get into how she was corrupted and given the power to assume a dragon's form.
In Rizkaland (and Lintoalintae, since that's the world where these dragons originated), Dragons are thoroughly intelligent. Those whose natural shape is a dragon can speak English quite perfectly. Amber can't, but since she can also take on a human form, she doesn't really need to.
And they're evil. Sorry, but from where I stand right now, I don't see Rizkaland ever getting any good dragons, unless they're escapees from some world other than Lintooalintae. That could happen, seeing as how Rizkaland is, as Laura puts it, a receiving world, but I currently don't have any appearances planned.
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Dragon's weren't a huge element in The Ankulen, unless you were talking to a certain redhead. However, her dragons are the dragons of my WIP Half-Hidden, so I'm going to just go ahead and talk about them.
These dragons are good. (Finally! Good dragons!) While it's true that they have a fallen version known as the Wyrmen (which don't have wings and often don't have legs), Dragons themselves were not corrupted by their world's fall. However, they still live in a fallen, death-stained world. While they don't die of age or disease, they can be slain, in which case their scales are burned away and they join the Hidden.
They're quite intelligent, but cannot speak the human tongue.
They've been terribly fun to world build. They are thoroughly intelligent, though they're naturally more violent than humans. (Not that they're blood-thirsty. That's the wyrmen) I've got all sorts of their culture figured out, from history, politics, family structure, even mating rituals.
Unfortunately, a lot of the world building that I've put into this world involves plot spoilers, so I'll just leave you with this tidbit - in Hidden form, their fire is for healing. If they get cut, even what should be a mortal wound, their blood will burst into flame, and within moments, they will be healed. I'm not sure what would happen if their limbs got severed, but I think their bones are iron hard and impossible to slice through.
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In Mikada, the sci-fi universe that my sister and I are working on together, we have the Madeoffs, which are dragon-like. They'll be introduced in Rise of the Daisy, which is the book where Mikada's main kingdom is formed.
V. is the one who'd done all of the plotting for them, but she's told me a few things about them.
I don't know if they're intelligent or not, but I do know that they're young are in the form of snakes, and that they don't breath air. I don't know what they breath, but they live in the vacuum of space. They're one of the main villains of the two series. Definitely evil.
I'm not sure how, but there's something about their scales that renders the creatures unreadable by any sort of radar. Because of this, their scales are used by the Mixers to coat their space vessels.
And that's about all I know about them. I know much more about the fairies, since they're what I created. Shall we continue on? Let see, what other worlds do I have that involve dragons ...
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In Dialcia, the world that Jack and I have created for the book we're coauthoring, Dragons are the main villains. (Dear me, evil dragons are quite the majority in my writing ...)
We've never actually worked with them, but we do know that King Ossian is friends with them, and it's believed that they were the ones to convince him to kill King Edson and provide him with the tools.
They're the sworn enemies of the Zovorians, the masked people of the book, and it's because Edson had a Zovordian mother that they wanted him dead.
I have gotten to work with the Zovordians, though. They have an interesting culture. They're human, and devout followers of El Shaddai, and they believe that people should be known for their deeds, not their name and appearance. As a result, they all wear masks, and they all go by a 'Z' name. Zara, Zirro, Zidia. They have true names, which don't start with z's, but they're only known by close friends and family.
Let's get back to dragons, now shall we?
Scanning down through my WIP list, I'm not finding many other books that have dragons as huge elements ... oh, wait! The New Division.
Unfortunately, I don't have any pictures of their dragons. (Technically, I stole Dialcia's dragon from Half-Hidden's board).
They aren't intelligent, but they the Harshia revere them as their gods, and sacrifice livestock, sometimes even people to them. They themselves aren't the issue, since they're actually quite majestic (if a bit blood-thirsty) creatures. It's just the misplaced worship.
And there we go. Dragons in my writing. I have more worlds, that I know have dragons, but these are the important ones. I can't talk yet about the dragons I've planned for book two of my secret series (now those, and the wizards, have some interesting dynamics. They're intelligent and about half and half on the goodness scale. The villain's a dragon ... but the heroine rides one). Perhaps I'll have discovered more dragons by next year. Who knows? I really need to work on the good dragon quotia.
Anyways, I'm off to work on book two of the Rizkaland legends, which has Dragon in the title.
Thursday, July 31, 2014
CE Backyard - Bark, Ivy, and Aoril
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I'm making a mad dash for the other house to get out of the rain when I'm attacked. Without warning, I'm on my back in the wet weeds, with a pair of wild brown eyes boring in to mine. I try to swallow, wondering what mad person has attacked me and why.
"Fun!"
The girl draws back, and I can see her cropped brown hair, brown scale dress and leggings, and brown fingernails.
"What are you doing here, Bark?" I ask, sitting up.
"Fun!"
I'm slammed to the ground again, and this time the eyes boring into mine are green.
"Hello, Ivy."
"FUN!!"
And she's now off of me. I sit up, rubbing my ears and cautiously get to my feet. The two girls are now roughhousing with each other. Right now, Ivy, with her long black hair, green and black scale armor, and green fingernails, is on top.
"How in Rintaria did you two get here," I mutter, shaking my head.
"They wanted to see you. Someone mentioned you were fun."
I turn to see a man who, despite his young appearance, was gray-haired. His fingernails were the same shade of gray, and he wore silver scale armor. His eyes are brown.
I dip my head in respect. "It's good to see you, Aoril. How did you get here."
"Our Len said they could come visit while Stardrana is at the castle recovering from healing Wendi," he explained. "I came to keep an eye on them."
"I see. I think Stardrana will recover quickly, if the scene can get written," I observe. "Your Len is facing that nasty thing called writer's block."
"She's mentioned, that's why she said we could come see you. I believe it's time for us to get back. Girls!"
Both jump up and run over to him, nearly knocking him off balance with the force of their hug. "Fight!" they chorus.
"Yes, girls, we need to get back to the fight. It was good speaking with you, Anka Kendra."
"And you, too, Winddancer."
"In this form, you need only call me Aoril."
Party Game - Scavenger Hunt
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Below are hint for where to find these pictures. The year that the post was posted, and a clue to the post's title. Every picture will be at the bottom of its post, and after it, the fun fact. When you find one, comment on it, and I'll keep track. Every one you find will be an entry for a drawing, the winner of which will read the first few chapters that I wrote for Camp NaNo last year as well as the snippet that I have in my RambleK.
1. 2014. This is not normally a good Combination.
2. 2013. This Dragon doesn't care much for Trees.
3. 2013. I'm an Extrovert, by the way.
4. 2009. The Iliad and Odossey
5. 2011. Gwain and the not Green Knight
6. 2012. Fire and Walls.
7. 2012. Ashes and Wind
8. 2010. An Old Oak
9. 2012. This Spaghetti sounds nasty.
10. 2012. This isn't Snow White, but the title sounds like it might be.
11. 2014. I keep Makilien cool.
12. 2013. They aren't blood brothers ... for one thing, they're girls.
Have fun, and good luck! May your fires burn strong!
300 Dragons - Chapter 1
Chapter 1
Jyson
In
his dreams, Jyson could always fly. The ground would disappear from
under his feet and he would soar through the air, the glaring sun not
a torment, but a source of energy. But then he would always wake up.
He
has often wondered about the meaning of these dreams, and why they
were so consistent. Flight was not something he coveted in his waking
hours. He was normally quite content with his feet firmly routed on
the ground. It was just during the night …
However,
this was not a morning given to contemplation. He and his cousin,
Samul, had been summoned to the capitol for the first time, and
thoughts could not be spared to anything beyond the fact that they
were leaving today.
“Do
you think King Hubert is going to prefer you or me me?” Samul
asked, flashing Jyson a grin over the stable partition as they
saddled their horses. “Because frankly, I don't see how he's going
to resist my charming manners.”
Jyson
shook his head as he tightened the girth. “If he can get past your
pretentious attitude, I think you'll do just fine.”
“It's
part of my charm, Jy,” said Samul. “Now you, I really don't know
what you have to recommend yourself – unless he's interested in
broody young knights given to violent bursts and obsessed with
keeping their hands smooth.”
“You
never know,” said Jyson, frowning momentarily at his gloved hands.
“I've heard that King Hubert can be quite the broody man himself.
We might find that we have much in common.”
“If
he can get past your gloves.”
“Look,
I don't wear gloves because I like it and you know it. It was my
father's last order to my mothers that my hands never be seen, and I
like to respect that.”
“You
don't have to get so worked up about it, Jy,” said Samul, daring to
laugh. “I just think that it was a very strange request. Did he
think your hands deformed or something.”
Jyson
tensed slightly, as he thought of the other part of his father's last
order – that he never tell anyone the reason. No, his hands weren't
deformed, but the truth was almost as bad. “We'd better get going,”
he said aloud, opening the stall door. “We have a good two days'
journey ahead of us.”
“You're
right, I have two whole days that I can torment you non-stop. I can
spread it out, instead of cramming it all in now.”
Jyson
took a deep breath, willing himself to ignore his cousin. He liked
him and all that, and he could be amusing at times … but there were
other times when he could be just a bit exasperating.
“Hey,
Jy,” continued Samul. “Do you think there's any chance we might
see a dragon on our way there? Because that would be seriously cool.”
“It
would only be seriously cool if it stays well away from us. Those
beasts breath fire, if you'll remember. That's seriously hot.”
“What's
this!” exclaimed Samul in an incredulous voice. “Jyson cracking a
joke? The world must be coming to an end!”
Jyson
sighed. This was going to be a long two days.
“Hey,
Jy! What do you think that is?”
Jyson
glanced halfheartedly in the direction Samul was pointing. “I
really have no idea.”
“Looks
like an umbrella bird to me.”
“They
live further south – in the jungles. You're not going to see an
Umbrella Bird in the desert.”
“It
might be lost.”
“If
it is, it'll soon be dead. They can't survive without water.”
“Then
we should go rescue it!”
“Samul,
if it is an umbrella bird, which I seriously doubt, it can fend for
itself. If it isn't, then it can definitely fend for itself.”
“You
are so hardhearted, Jy.”
“No.”
Jyson sighed again. “I am just mindful of the fact that this is a
path of protection, and Grandfather has strictly ordered us to not
step off of it for any reason, lest we get lost in the desert
ourselves.”
“Ah,
he just doesn't want us to have any fun,” said Samul.
“I'm
more willing to believe that he doesn't want us to not reach the
Capitol,” said Jyson. “If we get lost, it's going to be very hard
for us to win the king's favor and all that.”
“Ah,
well, when you put it in that light, I suppose that this path does
have a certain appeal ...”
Jyson
closed his eyes and took a deep breath. He had predicted that two
days' travel in an unchanging landscape would make for a very bored
Samul, and he had been right. They were barely half a day away from
their grandfather's estate, and Samul was already wondering what the
hoped-for adventure had done with itself.
His
thoughts were suddenly cut short when a strange feeling spread over
him. Not foreboding, exactly, but it was something very similar,
causing the hair on the back of his neck to rise. “Something's
nearby,” he said, not sure why he was so certain of that fact.
“Really?”
asked Samul, excitement rising in his voice again. “What? Where?”
“I
– I don't know,” said Jyson, frowning. “But it's …” He
turned his head in the direction Samul had been pointing. “It's
that direction.”
“That's
the umbrella bird,” said Samul. “We've already decided that we're
going to leave it alone, boring as the prospect is.”
“No
… it's …” Jyson found himself unable to speak as the brown
creature that Samul had been pointing to suddenly zoomed towards him,
becoming recognizable.
“That's
no umbrella bird,” said Samul. “That's a dragon.”
Jyson
was unable to speak as he reigned in his horse and watched the dragon
glide over the burning sand. Its eyes were fixed on him, and Jyson
had the oddest feeling of familiarity, as if he had seen those eyes
before.
Just
before the dragon reached the path, it veered upwards and soon
disappeared far into the hazy sky, and the feeling was gone.
Jyson
shook himself and turned to his cousin, who had stopped several feet
ahead of him. “Well, there's your dragon. Do you mind if the rest
of the trip is uneventful?”
“For
today at least,” said Samul. “Can't promise tomorrow. Was it too
scary for you? It didn't even blow smoke at us!”
“No
it was … let's just get going. We're wasting time.” Jyson dug his
spurs into the horses sides and he was off again. Samul was not slow
to follow suit.
Soon
the dragon's eyes were pushed to the back of his mind and all but
forgotten.
“And
we have arrived intact and without harm,” Samul announced, as they
neared the walls of the Capitol. “And in good time, too. We should
be able to have a nice, long heart-to-heart conversation with the
king, and still have time for supper.”
“We
might,” said Jyson, impatiently. “But I really doubt that King
Hubert does.”
“Yes,
yes, you're right as always, Jy,” said Samul handing his papers to
the guard at the side of the gate. “Well, we'll get supper at
least, I'm sure.”
“Yes,
what a relief,” said Jyson, handing his own papers to the other
guard.
“King
Hubert is waiting for you,” announced Samul's guard, handing Samul
back his papers. “You'll find him in his throne room.”
“Eh,
same for you,” said the other guard, handing Jyson his. “Now
hurry up.”
“But
sirs,” said Samul. “This is our first time to visit our lovely
Capitol. We don't know the way to the throne room.”
“The
main road will take you straight to the palace gates,” said his
guard, irritably. “You can ask for further instructions when you
get there.”
“Thank-you
kindly, sir,” said Samul, tipping his hat good-naturedly. “Now,
if you don't mind, we'll just be along.”
It
wasn't until they were through the gates before he finally turned and
acknowledged the look that Jyson was giving him. “What?”
“Grandfather
told us that the main street leads straight towards the palace
gates,” said Jyson. “In fact, that information is pretty much
universally known throughout Rintaria.”
“Ah,
but I wanted to make them feel useful.”
“You
annoyed them, that's what you did.”
“It's
good to be among people again, don't you think?” asked Samul,
changing the subject, and gesturing to the crowded street spread
before them. “The Capitol is certainly a busy place, isn't it?”
“Well,
this is where the king lives,” said Jyson. “Of course it's going
to be busy.”
Slowly,
but surely, they guided their horses through the maze of people. No
one took much notice of them, except for a beggar or two asking for
alms. At last they came to the magnificent palace gates.
Samul
whistled as they dismounted. “And you thought that the gates to the
city were something to look at! Why, I do believe that these are
solid gold.”
“Nay,”
said the bored guard who stood by this gate. “Merely wood covered
with gold plate. King Harold doesn't like people knowing that,
though. What's your business, gentlemen, or have you only come to
ogle at the gates.”
Papers
were again produced and examined, and soon the gate was opened for
the pair. No sooner had they stepped in the courtyard than a
groomsman approached them and claimed their horses. A moment after
that, another servant appeared, bidding them to “follow him.”
“And
there goes asking for directions,” complained Samul. Jyson just
shook his head.
The
palace halls were as busy as the streets, but it was an organized
busy. Their guide lead them effortlessly though the people bustling
here and there, people even pausing to acknowledge their presence. It
wasn't long before they found themselves standing before a pair of
magnificent doors, solid oak and carved with the most intricate
design, which stood open, showing the way into an even more
magnificent room.
Unlike
the halls, this room was peaceful. The chandeliers glittered on the
ceiling, the carpet leading to the throne was pristine, and every
step made on the hardwood floor could be heard. The throne itself was
on a platform at least twelve feet off of the ground, and was covered
in gold and ivory. The throne was also empty.
“Well,
well, don't just stand there!” a powerful voice boomed and echoed
through the room. “Come in, come in – state your business! What
do you want with the great and mighty King Harold?”
Because
of the echoing, it took a few seconds before Jyson focused on the
speaker, who was a powerfully built man just exiting his prime, his
brown hair just beginning to be touched by gray, who stood just to
the side of the steps leading up to the throne. He wore a purple robe
and a thick band of gold encircled his head.
Jyson
and Samul shared a glance before Samul took the initiative to step
forward and bow deeply. “Your Majesty, I am Samul, son of Lord
Elar, Grandson of Lord Garan, Baron of Ridaria, and this is my
cousin, Jyson, whose mother was my father's sister. We have obeyed
your especial summons and are willing to receive the honor of joining
your service.”
A
broad smile spread across King Harold's face, and before Jyson could
think to join his cousin in obeisance, had already gestured for Samul
to stand back up. “Ah, Garan's grandsons. Fine young men! Your
grandfather must be very proud!”
Before
either young man could respond, a woman's voice rang out. “But why
do you not mention Jyson's father? Do you consider it a shame to be
sired by my friend Dular?”
Jyson
at last noticed the two ladies seated in luxurious velvet chairs on
the other side of the throne. They looked to be the same age, one
with rich, golden hair, the other with hair whiter than snow, though
it did nothing to make her look older.
The
white-haired rose and took a few steps nearer. “Yes, you have grown
into a fine young man. I'm sure Dular would have been proud.” She
paused and turned an inquiring look towards the golden-haired. “Do
you not think so, Analyssa, my daughter?”
Jyson
blinked, as he realized who the pair were – Queen Blanche and
Princess Analyssa themselves! And it seemed that Queen Blanche's
famous youth was no rumor at all.
Princess
Analyssa stood up, flicking her skirt with her wrist so that it
billowed around her dramatically. “I wouldn't know what Dular would
have thought of him, for I never met Dular,” she said, her voice
sweet, yet powerful at the same time. “And I do not think it is
propitious for me to state my own opinion, mother.” With those
words, she swept down the carpet and past Jyson and out of the room.
The smell of desert roses lingering momentarily after her.
“Ah,
since we are to be denied my daughter's favored opinion, we may as
well get down to business,” announced King Harold. “The two of
you will make fine additions to my men, if you resemble your fathers
even in the slightest.”
“You
flatter us, your majesty,” said Samul, dipping into another bow.
“We will pleased enough if only our service can bring honor to
you.”
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He was hooked, and the next two stories we did, he was Jason. The first one has become part of Bookania, but it's the second that I'd like to talk about here.
It was a story of a young knight who wants to marry a princess, and had been told by her father that he could - if he slayed thirty dragons. Then he joined a group who were also hunting dragons - though for very different reasons. They informed him that the thirty dragons he hunted were actually the last of the good dragons, and that the princess, who loved the good dragons, would only marry him if he helped slay three hundred evil dragons.
I decided that I wanted the party to be made of seven people, including Jason. But I needed reasons for the others to be hunting. My character was secretly the princess in disguise, so she was easy (This cousin has played my love interest so many times ...). Then I tossed in a pair of siblings whose family was wiped out in an evil dragon attack.
That left three more members.
A brilliant idea came to me - what if the last three members were actually dragons - the good dragons - trapped in human form. And they hunted the dragons because it was a way by which they could someday restore their scales. And the reason that the princess loved the dragons so much was that her mother was one of them.
The cousin loved this idea.
(And yes, my intention had been to withhold this plot twist from ya'll until you read the book, but I've realized that it's a plot twist that most of you would figure out, and since there are other somewhat popular books that have the same twist - books I hadn't read until I'd already formed the basic plot, I'd like to point out - I decided that I'd just put it out in the open and let ya'll deal with it.)
The story game we played outside eventually fizzled away, and it's possible that he's forgotten about it. I started writing a bit of it in my RambleK document, but I didn't officially start digging into the story until last year's Camp NaNo.
And by the way, the reason for the change in this Jason's name to Jyson was not because they were too similar (I'm a huge fan of overusing names) but because their love interests have too much in common. Both have two names but go by the second predominately, both are associated with dragons, and both are associated with the color gold. And both have knives as their weapon of choice.
This book is part of the Ankulen universe - basically, if you read about a certain redhead talking about dragons in The Ankulen, she's almost certainly talking about the dragons in Rintaria. It's a desert world, and I would describe its culture as more Arabic than many of my other worlds. I'm very much looking forward to sharing this world with all of you.
Also, check out Robyn Hoode's blog for an interview with Stardrana, the half-Hidden (the name that the humanized dragons gave themselves) heroine of the book.
Friday, December 13, 2013
Kendra the Author

And now for part two of Cait and Mime's linkup!
1. How many books did you write this year? (Estimate your overall wordcount for us too!)
I only wrote one full book this year, The Ankulen's second draft, and it ended up at 70,000+ words. But I also worked on most of my other books.
Just Another Sci-Fi Novel 50,000
The New Division 16,000
Half-Hidden 10,000
Behind the Rainbow 2,000
Water Princess, Fire Prince 50 notebook pages, which turns into 12,500 words at my average squish (how many words I can fit onto one page, my record's nearly 350 words, but it's usually closer to 250)
My Kingdom for a Quest 45 notebook pages, 11,000 words
Worth of a King 3 chapters at 1,400 words, 1,200 words, and 1,600 words.
And I've worked on some short stories which rack up another 3,000, 2,500, 1,500, and 1,400 words.
Which all together is over 184,000 words, since I was rounding down, which is pretty epic all things considered. I think I shall attempt to double that for next year ...
2. Which was your favourite to write?
Shish-kabobs. Quaggleshump. Jump-rope. Popcorn.
You're making me CHOOSE!
Well, if I have to make this difficult decision, I think I shall have to go with Water Princess, Fire Prince, simply because I've been working on it the longest, and because I love its plot and characters.
3. Which was the hardest to write?
My Kingdom for a Quest. Ugh. That book is constantly getting itself stuck. I'm breezing through it fine right now, however!
4. Tell us about you favourite Male Character you wrote this year!
Derek from The Ankulen. Having grown up with very few peers of the opposite gender, I often struggle with writing them as characters. But both my Grandma and Aunt Viv (who both grew up as only daughters with two brothers, and Grandma raised three boys) say that I pulled Derek off pretty well.
Derek had a very bad childhood, including, but not limited to, his parents divorcing and his mother adamantly not wanting him. He wants a family, but has been burned so badly, he's wary of anyone who tries to get close to him. In the first draft of the book, he was a complete jerk, but in the second draft ... eep. He's a great guy, despite how annoying he can be, and he makes a great big brother.
5. And how about your favourite Female Character?
This one's even worse, because I love all of my gals. But since I have to choose, I'll go with Analyssa Stardrana from Half-Hidden, the titular half-hidden. She's one of my rebellious princesses, but she's not in-your-face about it. Her mother's people hunt wyrmen and ride dragons, so she spends much of her time doing that. But when she's at home with her father's people, she's as proper a princess as you could ask for ... though she can be quite haughty when in the presence of a potential suitor.
6. Can you introduce us to some awesome sidekick(s)?
Tisha and Chris from The Ankulen, and the short story "The Adventure of the Sun Jewel" where they are even more sidekicky than in the main novel (despite the fact that Jenny declares it Chris's adventure).
They are figments of Jen's imagination, but because she has an Ankulen, she was able to bring them to life as a child. Sir Chrisofer is her personal protector, and Fair Maiden Letitia is her best friend. At least, they were until they managed to get out of her imaginary world and install themselves as Jen's brother and sister ... a stunt that Jen was not impressed with.
7. Any romances in your writing? Which couple didn't go together as expected?
Plenty of romances. A and M in Just Another SciFi; Clara and Andrew, the titular Water Princess and Fire Prince; Obsidia and Delaney in Worth of a King; Jyson and Stardrana in Half-Hidden. A romance between two side characters in The Ankulen. Oh, and everyone in My Kingdom for a Quest. That's complicated.
But as for anyone not coming together as expected, that didn't happen, unless you count the fact that Clara has finally decided that Andrew isn't half-bad after all much sooner than I had initially intended. I realized that I needed to have them working together before the climatic battle, you see.
8. What's your favourite Pinterest Board for one of your books? Can we see some pics for the book they inspire?
I think that would be the board for the Rizkaland Legends, to which Water Princess, Fire Prince belongs.
And sure, I'll show you some pics!
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9. What challenges did you compete in this year? (NaNos? Personal goals? Challenges run by other blogs?) And how did you go?
I did and won NaNo. I attempted and gave up on July's NaNo (Where I got most of Half-Hidden's word count), I did and completed the first 100-for-100 over at Go Teen Writers, and I attempted the second, but realized that it was intruding on projects that were much more important. I did Actually Finishing Something In July hosted by Whisperings of the Pen, though I didn't do as good as I wanted to.
As for personal goals, I published The Ankulen and Do You Take This Quest. The latter was supposed to be out last December, but ... anyways. Ankulen got out on the day I intended!


10. Show us the full cast in pictures from one of your books.
Most of my books have these epicly huge casts that I can barely keep up with (but have tons of fun doing so), and if I were to do any of them, we'd be here all day. But The Ankulen actually had a pretty small, self contained cast, and I've hunted down pictures of almost everyone, so I'll do it.
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Jen, the main character, narrator, and possessor of the ultimate case of writer's block. This girl actually needs more freckles, but everything else about her is pretty good.
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Jen as a child ... back when she was called Jenny, and right after she developed her Writer's Block. And there is an important plot reason for her being in black and white.
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Fair Maiden Letitia. Jen's former best friend, now here resented adopted sister. She's in black and white for a similar reason.
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Sir Christofer, Jen's valiant protector. He was trapped in Jen's imagination after she discovered the whole getting out and becoming a sibling mess, so he's still a kid. Which was pretty interesting.
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Megan, the girl Jen's parents were supposed to adopt. She's so sweet and innocent, despite being fifteen. She provided such a nice balance for the grudge-holding Jen once she entered the story.
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Derek, the boy Jen's parents were supposed to adopt, and Megan's complete opposite. He was so cynical and jaded ... but I've talked about him earlier, so I won't say anything more.
11. Epic quote(s) you wrote?
Arthur carefully selected an arrow and fitted it to his bowstring. He drew back, carefully aimed, then let it fly.
It missed the target by a good three feet.
"You're improving!"
Arthur turned to see his cousin, Robert, who was endevoring to teach him archery. "I was closer the last time."
"Yes, but your form is better this time." Robert claimed the bow from Arthur, selected an arrow from his quiver, fitted it to the string, and fired. The arrow flew straight to the target and sank soundly in the bull's eye. "No one masters archery in a day. You've only been at it two weeks. Give it time."
"How long did it take you?"
Robert slid the bow onto his back and gathered up the arrows and trust them into the quiver. "A week and a half."
- My Kingdom for a Quest
“What
dost thou plan to do?”
“Oh,
read Fibonacci’s
Rabbits for
the one thousand and fiftieth time, discover the one hundredth
twenty-third place in pi, roam the garter, talk with my birds, and,
if I can squeeze it in, boredly watch as quinces try to rescue me.”
“Ah,
thou dost have a busy day ahead of thee! I hope that thou mayest get
it all done!”
Doranna sighed. “Well, if I get started at once, I just might!”
She glanced at the mirror for a moment, trying to perfect her
expression of complete and utter boredom, but instead burst into
laughter. Maria soon joined her, shaking her head in amusement.
“Any
other princess,” said Maria, as their mirth died down, “wouldst
be in tears after spending … how long has it been? Fifty? Sixty?
Seventy years trapped in a castle caught in time. But thou, Princess
Doranna, thou art a wonder.”
“Seventy-seven years and three
hundred and three days,” said Doranna, automatically. She sighed.
“Verily, it hast been far too long. I tire of my confidence, yet my
only other opinion is unsinkable.”
- "Woodcutter Quince"
“Hey,
Jy,” continued Samul. “Do you think there's any chance we might
see a dragon on our way there? Because that would be seriously cool.”
“It
would only be seriously cool if it stays well away from us. Those
beasts breath fire, if you'll remember. That's seriously hot.”
“What's
this!” exclaimed Samul in an incredulous voice. “Jyson cracking a
joke? The world must be coming to an end!”
- Half-Hidden
I glanced around
myself and feigned a sigh of disappointment. “You’re right. We
landed high and dry. Oh, I hope this isn’t a desert! What if
there’s no water at all! We’ll die of thirst!”
V was now on the
ground and glaring up at me. “Cut. It. Out.”
“Fine, Vienna
Sausages,” I said, rumpling her hair, causing her to squeak. “Let’s
just see if we can find that rainbow. You know what they say, where
there’s a rainbow, there’s bound to be water!”
“Kendra!”
“That's my name –
don't wear it out!”
- Behind the Rainbow
And I think that's all I'll share for now.
12. Last word from your manuscript(s)! Go!
The Ankulen: note
Just Another Sci-Fi Novel: Door
The New Division: Grandmother
Half-Hidden: gone
Behind the Rainbow: already
Water Princess, Fire Prince: day
My Kingdom for a Quest: honeymoon
Worth of a King: anxious
"Woodcutter Quince": guess
"Gift Exchange": think
"CinderEddy": was
"The Sun Jewel Adventure": asked
That's quite an interesting collection...
13. First sentences from your manuscript(s)!
The Ankulen: I have no imagination
Just Another Sci-Fi Novel: In our day and age, competition among authors has grown fierce.
The New Division: During the Great Depression, it was not an unusual thing for a small baby to be left on the doorstep of an orphanage by parents unable to provide for the tiny life.
Half-Hidden: In his dreams, Jyson could always fly.
Behind the Rainbow: I hear that my sister is being all dramatic and all that up there, with the present tense and stuff like that. (This is actually the first sentence of the second chapter, by my sister wrote the first chapter)
Water Princess, Fire Prince: Clara sat at the top of a big slide with three of her friends. (Actually, that line's around five years old. I've been working on this story that long!)
My Kingdom for a Quest: Once upon a time, in a land called Bookania, two servants were locked in a dungeon for the mere crime of not knowing where their prince was.
Worth of a King: “Milady, please, put down the book, I need to do your hair.”
"Woodcutter Quince": Once upon a time, in a land called Bookania, there lived a woodcutter and his wife in the middle of a large and fearsome wood called Black Forest.
"Gift Exchange": Once upon a time in a land called Bookania, a small party was camped beside the main road, but was in no hurry to continue their journey, at least not that day, for it was a very special day.
"CinderEddy": Once upon a time there was a valiant knight whose kindness and bravery were known throughout the land.
"The Sun Jewel Adventure": Jenny Brown was eight years old.
14. Show us your favourite funny scene!
Ooh. This one's tough, partly because I have a lot of funny scenes (many of the punny variety,) and partly because most of those funny scenes are only funny in context. But I'll look ...
Without
thinking, I began slowly walking in the direction I was being pulled.
I heard Tisha and Chris fall into step behind me, but I kept my eyes
shut. We walked like this for some time, but then I ran into a tree.
Yes,
you read that right. I ran into a tree.
Well,
actually, I walked
into
that tree, but, still. The tree and my face had a collision.
Instantly,
my eyes flew open and I jumped backwards. As I pulled off my glasses
to make sure they were still intact, I heard giggling behind me, so I
threw a glare over my shoulder. “Yes?”
“Were
– were you walking with your eyes closed?” questioned Tisha, who
was, to her credit, trying
not
to laugh.
“What
does it matter if I was?” I answered, turning my attention back to
my glasses. Well, at least they didn't seem to be harmed. With
grudging satisfaction, I slid them back onto my nose and turned to
face the pair.
- The Ankulen
15. Show us a snippet of dialogue you're proud of.
Again, difficult. I'm a dialogue-driven author (in case you haven't noticed from the above snippets), so to single out one snippet (that, again, makes sense out of context) is tricky. But I'll look!
Robert
sighed and shook his head. "Well, I'm her brother, and I say she
can't sleep in any longer." With that, he stood up and marched
over to the girl's tent and pulled back the flap. "Robin! If you
sleep any longer, you'll miss the party."
No
response.
"Robin!"
he said, louder. "Wake up. It is morning."
"Go
away," Robin growled. "I'm asleep."
"Fine
then. You'll miss the party." Robert turned to go, intending to
get some pine cones or something that he could throw at his sister to
wake her up.
"What
party?"
Robert
turned to see that Robin had actually opened her eyes and propped
herself up on one elbow. He grinned. "Well, Eric's here, so it
must be a party."
"Go
away."
- "Gift Exchange"
16. Tell us about some funny typos or writer-bloopers you've had this year!
Um, during NaNo I wrote that that the ceilings in engineering were taller than in other humans ... instead of other rooms. Also writing the words "The flippant" turned into "Theippant" somehow.
17. What has writing taught you about yourself this year?
Patience. You have to be very patient when it comes to writing. Very, very patient.
18. Best piece of writing advice you learnt this year?
Don't insist that the first draft be perfect. I didn't used to, and then I did, and now I don't anymore. I love rough drafting, but actually, my favorite part of writing is rewriting.
19. Anything big on the horizons for next year? Plans to query? Publish? Edit?
I hope to publish a short story collection and at least one more installment of the Bookania Quests. I
20. Tell us a bit about a book you're super excited to write in 2014!
Hopefully I will (finally!) finish with Water Princess, Fire Prince's first draft, and I'm looking forward to tearing it apart and rebuilding it. Maybe I'll have it out by June 2015! (I can dream, right?) I'm also looking forward to writing book two of the Rizkaland Legends. This is one of my oldest stories, and it'll be its fifth draft. Very fun!
A bit about the two? Well, the series is inspired by Narnia, and as a result, it involves a lot of world traveling. Book one (WP,FP) is about two teens, Clara and Andrew, who become a Water Princess and Fire Prince and are forced to work together and save the island of Klarand. And that sounds really cheesy, doesn't it?
(And the reason I didn't share any snippets from that book was the fact that I'm so close to finished, almost everything would spoil the plot)
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