Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Save Your Fire

Katie has once again called for a show of Snippets! However, this time, unlike usual when I post a whole slew of tiny bits of writing, I shall post one longer segment from each of my writings. Except for The Ankulen. As I've already stated, I'm done sharing bits and pieces of that one. You shall have to wait until the full novel comes out before you can read anymore.



"Well, then," said Mordreth, lowering his voice, causing Gavin to quiver even more fearfully than before. "If you don't have the information I seek, I don't have any use for you anymore. You have until tomorrow afternoon to give me the information I seek. Otherwise ... well, I'll leave it to you to imagine up what I'm planning to do." The window was slammed shut and footsteps were heard trudging away.
"You don't suppose he's going to give us seats of honor in his parade tomorrow?" asked Leo, turning to his friend. "Because that would be very fun."
"It would be, I'm sure ... but knowing Mordreth, it would be a parade to our deaths!"
"You don't say? Well, then we ought to figure out a way to escape before he has a chance to do so."
"And how do you plan to do that?"
"Haven't figured it out yet. No worries, though. We have at least twelve hours before Mordreth's parade. We should have plenty of time to figure out how to get out of here."
"Only twelve hours! Leo, there is no way to escape Briton dungeons. No way!"
"That's what they said in the dungeons in Fronce, too," said Leo, eating a bite of his gruel. "Now, be quiet while I think. And eat up! We'll need our strength. Prison food may be lousy, but it's what we have. No use complaining!"
"Dungeons in Fronce?" Gavin squeaked.
"Yes, now those were some dungeons. Be quiet."
Gavin fell silent and simply observed his friend, the look on his face (if it had been visible in that dark cell) a mixture of confusion, awe, and horror.
"You wouldn't happen to have fallen in love with any young lady who might be able to arrange a soldier to play traitor and let us go, now would you?" Leo suddenly spoke up.
"No ..."
"Ah, well I suppose not every young lady can be so obliging. And, then again, falling in love with them is as good a way into the dungeon as out. Now, where were we ... no, bribing the guard is out of the question. We have nothing but gruel to call our own, and I'm sure they have much better food in the soldier's quarters.
"There's no way that we'll be able to get out of here!" Gavin moaned.
"That's what you think. That's what everyone thinks. But I tell you, there's always a way out of every sticky situation. You just have to be observant and look for it." Leo frowned as he set his now-empty bowl to the side. "It's too bad that Mordreth doesn't have any pretty daughters for us to charm. Only that good for nothing Kew, and I really do not see him helping us. And Prince Arthur's gone, of course, so that's out of the question."
"If Prince Arthur were here," said Gavin, dryly, "We wouldn't be in the dungeon!"
"Good point," said Leo. "As I was saying, we could always try to steal a key and unlock the door, but that can be very tricky business, and it's very easy to get caught and then where would we be? Probably talking about death sentences some more. Honestly, I don't mind death sentences, it's all this talk of them that annoys me."
- My Kingdom for a Quest

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    The moment that King Harold put a sword in Jyson's hands, he felt at ease. No queens who knew more about yourself than you did yourself, or princesses who look down their noses could be master over him. Not while he held a sword.
    “Well, you certainly have a good stance,” said King Harold, approvingly. “Now, let's see what you can do with it. Tomik?”
    Tomik, the captain of the guard, who would soon be captain over Samul and Jyson, ran towards him, his own sword drawn. Jyson clicked instantly into fight mode, raising his sword to meet Tomik's. He spun away, and made an attack of his own, towards the legs. Tomik blocked it, but barely.
   Taking a step back, he prepared for the next attack, which proved to be a jab towards the stomach. He stepped to the side, out of harm's way, and returned a jab of his own.
   Back and forth they went, neither giving an inch. Jyson could tell he was wearing Tomik down, however. It would only be a matter of time …
   “That is enough!”
   The words cut into his concentration for only a moment, but Tomik took a step back, starting to sheath his sword. Jyson would have none of that, no one should just step down from a fight. He launched himself forward …
    “I said, that is enough!” King Harold's voice thundered.
   This time the words penetrated into his understanding. Almost confused, he turned to the king, unsure what to say … or even if he should say anything at all. Maybe he should see how well he could fight. How …
    “Jy, put down the sword!” Samul's voice trickled in.
Jyson whirled on his cousin, who seemed almost afraid. Perfect. He took a step nearer …
    “No, Jy. Snap out of it! Put the sword down!”
    “Jyson son of Dular,” a third voice floated across the courtyard. A woman's voice. Queen Blanche's. It was gentle, yet commanding. He slowly turned, and saw her standing behind the fence that marked off the area that was designated for weapons practice. “Now is not the time to fight. Save your fire for the true enemy. Do not waste it now. Not with friends.”
Jyson had no choice. He dropped the sword. As it clattered to the ground, he came back to his senses. Sheepishly, he turned to the king. “Uh sorry, sire. I … got carried away.”
    “You are a fighter, Jyson,” said Queen Blanche. “I expected no less of you. Your father would be proud to have a son who walks so close in his footsteps. I know …” she suddenly broke off. Jyson turned back towards her in surprise, and found that the expression she wore was now pained. “No … I mustn’t think of the past,” she whispered. “It is gone.” Her eyes fell onto her hands, which she glared at for a moment before she looked back up. “His father was very known for losing himself in a fight.”
     “I know,” said King Harold, thoughtfully. “He would have made a good soldier but for the fact that he refused to take orders.”
     “He never had to before,” said she.
     “Well, Jyson,” said King Harold, turning back to Jyson. “I think I shall take advantage of your skills, but I do not know how well you will do as part of an army, but it is likely that you will do as poorly as your father did. It may be a while before I find a task suited to your unique talents.” He turned to Tomik. “Now, if you are not too tired, do you mind if I ask you test the skills of his cousin? I hear that he is not quite so … enthusiastic.” He bent down and picked up the fallen sword and handed it to Samul.
     Part of Jyson tried to protest to this – that was his sword! – but he forced himself to stand still. The king could do whatever he wanted to. Right?
     “I think I could handle another fight, now that I have my breath again,” said Tomik. “Shall we begin?” He drew his sword again.
    Samul fought no worse than he usually did, and very little better. Having already had his own fight with Tomik, Jyson had already acquainted himself with the captain's fighting style, so he soon lost interest in the fight, and unconsciously drifted over towards the queen.
     “You fought well.” Her voice suddenly cut into his thoughts, causing him to spin to face her again. “Do not believe for a moment that your skill escaped my notice. I have not seen such a natural fighter in a very long time … and yet your skills are unpolished. Ah, I would that I could gain for you the instructors who taught Stardrana, but I do not know if it is time for them to know of you.”
    “Stardrana?” repeated Jyson. “Who's he?”
   Her mysterious smile only made him more uncomfortable. “One whose future is, I have no doubt, very entwined with yours.”
    “What do you mean?”
    “No questions now,” said she, shaking her head. “For I am not yet permitted to give answer. Hopefully, soon, however all will make sense.” With those words, she turned, her cape billowing around her like a cloud, and walked away.
- 300 Dragons

    “Nay, I shalt not bury thee nor shall I ever!” declared Doranna, staring up at the painting that sat opposite her bed. A painting of Grumadam, the Evil Enchanter, the ugliest man she had ever laid eyes on, and the worst mannered.
    With a sigh, she hopped out of bed and marched over to the painting. She stuck out her tongue at the hideous man, then pulled her chalkboard over to cover him. She knew that it would only last a few hours before it rolled back again, it always did, but she hated having that man's eyes on hers … even if they were only paint.
    Then she walked over and rang a bell for her servant and sighed. After 28,439 days stuck at the top of this mountain, her daily routine was starting to get a little boring … okay, maybe it wasn't starting to. It WAS boring.
    “What would you like to wear today, milady?” asked Maria, entering the room.
    “Oh, how about the growing chest?” she said. “I have a pretty day ahead of me, so I need something radical.”
    “What dost thou plan to do?”
    “Oh, read Fibonacci’s Rabbits for the one thousand and fiftieth time, discover the one hundredth twenty-third place in pi, roam the garter, talk with my birds, and, if I can squeeze it in, boredly watch as quinces try to rescue me.”
    “Ah, thou dost have a busy day ahead of thee! I hope that thou mayest get it all done!”
Doranna sighed. “Well, if I get started at once, I just might!” She glanced at the mirror for a moment, trying to perfect her expression of complete and utter boredom, but instead burst into laughter. Maria soon joined her, shaking her head in amusement.
   “Any other princess,” said Maria, as their mirth died down, “wouldst be in tears after spending … how long has it been? Fifty? Sixty? Seventy years trapped in a castle caught in time. But thou, Princess Doranna, thou art a wonder.”
   “Seventy-seven years and three hundred and three days,” said Doranna, automatically. She sighed. “Verily, it hast been far too long. I tire of my confidence, yet my only other option is unthinkable.”
    “Well, thou never knowest. Today just might be the day that thy true prince gets past the challenges frees thee,” said Maria, encouragingly.
    “Aye, he could,” said Doranna, brightening for a moment. “But after all this time, I begin to think them too impossible. Even Maxie wast unable, despite his immunity to mangoes, and I wouldst have though him a true Quince. Though why he attempted my resurrection is quite beyond me, save that something happened to dear Shira.”
- "Woodcutter Quince"

Melisza was nearly giddy with excitement. “Tonight's the night!” she announced in English, as soon as Tabetha entered her room. “Tonight all of the Lilnia finally find out about us!”
Tabetha's face, as usual, registered no sign of understanding. “Where is the dress which you are to wear tonight, Dizalay?” she asked.
Her friend's stiff attitude dampened her enthusiasm. “On the bed,” said Melisza, still in English.
Milady?” said Tabetha, in a questioning voice. “I do not understand the human tongue, as you full know. Where is your dress?”
Wincing at her slip, Melisza repeated her words, this time in elvish.
Oh, Beth, I feel as though I am betraying you,” said Melisza, switching back to English as Tabetha began undoing the fastens on the back of the dress she was wearing. “Here I am, living in the lap of luxury, while you are a servant and little more than dirt!”
Tabetha as usual, did not respond.
There are days when I wish we could go back to the orphanage,” she continued. “We weren't liked there … but we were friends then. We could be friends. Alistaar doesn't feel the same way … he thinks you're better off here, but … I don't know what's gotten into him. Ever since he found out that he was a Nalish, he's resented ever living among the humans, ever letting you and your brother become close.”
The fastens were all unlatched and Tabetha helped her to step out of the dress. Then the fancy ceremonial dress was pulled over her head.
He thinks you're better off here as servants, but I …”
We are,” said Tabetha, suddenly, though in elvish. “Don't fret for us. We have friends among the Harshia now, and our work isn't too hard.”
Melisza turned to face her friend, blinking in surprise. “But …”
Do not let your thoughts dwell on my brother and me,” said Tabetha, shaking her head. “We are cursed Harshia, and not worth your notice. You are the Dizalay, and your thoughts must be for the bettering of the Lilnia.”
Melisza wanted to tell Tabetha that she was wrong, but the girl's face was so set, so sure. Her gaze fell to her hands as she fidgeted with the embellishments of her dress. “I just …”
If I am not stepping beyond my place,” continued Tabetha, and Melisza caught a slight tremble in her voice. “I would ask that you please stop speaking in English. You live among the Lilnia now, and should forget the humans. Besides, it makes it harder for me to serve you.”
Melisza opened her mouth, but Tabetha had turned away. “You are ready, Dizalay. The Lilnia await your announcement.”
As if Tabetha had planned it, the door opened at that moment, and in walked Liya, all smiles. “Ah, what a wonderful day it is today, granddaughter!” she said, triumphantly. “At long last, the Lilnia will see again that Elonodi does smile upon them.”
Melisza forced a smile. “Yes, tonight.”
Nervous, dear?” said Liya, brushing the backs of her fingers against Melisza's cheek. “I suppose that's understandable. You're not used to the crowds yet. But keep your chin up, it shan't be as bad as you think.” She turned to Tabetha, “That's all, Harshan. You may return to your quarters.”
Tabetha, who had been standing, still as a statue, hands folded in front of her, eyes fixed on the floor, snapped to attention, bowed slightly, then left the room. Melisza swallowed. Her best friend was gone for good. Oh, why did the Harshia have to be cursed?
- The New Division.

Monday, August 12, 2013

Memorable Worlds: Bookania

Bookania

My Experience with this World: 

I said that I would be talking about a few or two of my own worlds, so here we are. Bookania.

Bookania is not my oldest world, nor is it my newest, but it is the first one that I've published. My world building process for Bookania has been different than it has been for my other worlds, since I've taken a more laid-back and haphazard approach. At the moment, I don't know everything about it, and I'll probably still be discovering new things when I'm working on book 99.

Some of my books start with worlds and gain plots and characters, but not so with Bookania. It wasn't until after I came up with Robin that the country gained a name. Until then, it was just a storyland stuffed with fairy tale characters.

Once I gave the country a name, however, it gained a personality and a life of its own.

So far, I've written and published the first two books and a short story. I've started writing book three, but progress has been slightly slow. Beyond that point, I've actually written bits and pieces from twelve of the future books, but not necessarily the next twelve books.

Truth be known, oldest bit of Bookanian writing I have in my procession is about two of Robin and Eric's granddaughters, and sprung from randomly writing the names of the two girls down in a notebook. It lasted a good twelve or so notebook pages before it fizzled out (the plot was going too fast) and I laid the notebook aside. (Either that or started writing a new story in the notebook. I do that often.) Eventually I ran across the notebook and decided that it would be a good addition to Bookania, if I changed a few names and shifted some plot elements. I'm really looking forward to writing this book, but it'll probably end up being book 27 or so.

The bit of writing set farthest in the future is about the older brother to the granddaughters and the girl of his fairy tale. I can't say what fairy tale it is, only that it involves some swimming.

Origin:

Honestly, I don't know a thing about Bookania's origins, nor does anyone in Bookania I've talked to - not even the fairies. The funny thing about Bookanian history is that it repeats itself. The Robin Hood that R&R find in Sew is not the first Robin Hood to gather a band of merry men there. Robert is not the first prince to awaken a Sleeping Beauty with a kiss. (Although whether or not Robert kissed Rosamond awake is open to debate. Madeleine fled the scene before it happened.) Some of the fairy tales/myths/legends repeat faster than others. Cinderella is the most common, the longest its gone without a repeat is about 20 years. Sleeping Beauty and Casperl, however, since they span more time, has a longer cycle, up to a thousand years.

But, as I've said before, I do not know how Bookania came into being.

Geography:



Some of you may have noticed that I have never posted a map of Bookania before. That's because I really don't know what Bookania looks like. This is the third map I've drawn, and this one was for the express purpose of this post. Even so, if I were to draw it three months from now, it's likely to look very different. (perhaps have less white "Undecided area"? And I'm really not liking the placement of Chin.)

Before I start talking about the the geography of Bookania, I must talk about the physics of this world. You see, Bookania is a flat world. I knew that ever since I was plotting the tragic love life of the sister-in-law of one of Robin's daughters. However, it was only a few months ago that I discovered that it wasn't just any random flat world that you might pick up off the street. (No offence Narnia.) Bookania is ....
....

... (I'm creating dramatic tension here) ...

...

A book.

That's right folks! Bookania is a world within a book. Surprise, surprise? Basically, if you were to find the library that has this book in it, you would find a book of maps, each one connected seamlessly to the one before it. (I did toy, for a while, with the idea of making it one map over and over again, and traveling from one to another allows you to go one year in the future or a year back) This means that Bookania is a VERY big world. Most page spreads function independently of each other, but I do plan to have some characters explore to the east. (Eventually the west, too, but that'll be a while.) For right now, all we have to focus on is this spread. (Which is pretty much in the middle of the book, surprisingly enough.)

As you can see in the map, most of the land is in a huge lump, and its divided into several countries (and that huge annoying white blankness, but that will be corrected in time.) The corner divided into little countries, earldoms, and providences used to be a single country, but was divided up a good 250 or so years ago when the king died without heir. To the right we have Locksley, everyone's favorite country, then Germaine, Briton and Fronce. Across the (as yet unnamed) channel from Fronce is Englund. They've been at war for the last hundred years.

Below that we have Scotlund, which was formerly Upontime, Normandy, which was formerly Refrence and Skewwood, and Winthrop. Down in the bottom corner we have Chin, where Push au Kim came from.

The ocean surrounding this part of Bookania is called the Fante Sea. (Fante is pronounced like Dante.)

Whenever land borders the edge of a page (the top and bottom, that is) it is blocked by impassible mountains. Some of them are strengthened by magic, such as Mt. Ever Rest, which puts all climbers into an enchanted sleep from which they never awaken. There are other, friendlier mountain ranges elsewhere, such as the one separating Locklsey from the medley of kingdoms.

You may have noticed the two island clusters. They'll be important in book six. The odd bit of land in the corner won't be important until 16. I just put it there so that I knew where it was.

Of course you have Skewwood/Sherwood forest taking up most of Normandy and parts of Locklsey, Germaine, and Scotlund, and Black Forest creating the border between Briton and Fronce. And there's a desert on the lower half of Winthrop, S'Thera Desert.

Peoples and Culture:

The inhabitants of Bookania are mostly humans, but there are nine fairies, ten clouds sprites, enough Forest Guardians to guard the forests, and the odd dwarf or seven to take in a wandering Snow White.

Most of the humans on this page live a psado-medieval lifestyle. I.e. Whatever I like of medieval life I take, but I leave that which I don't. Royalty live in castles, which may or may not have moats, peasants live in huts, Robin Hood and his Merry Men live in the forest. Forks have not been invented yet, but etiquette has. However, there are sections, even in this part of Bookania, that have very different customs. (Chin is a good example, since it has a more Chinese flavor.)

There are seven good fairies and two bad ones, who were once good, but were tempted away by the lies of the Thwarter. I'm not, however, at liberty to talk too much about these mysterious beings however. You'll have to wait until book 11.

I haven't really talked about the Forest Guardians, but they made a brief appearance in Sew when Rosamond was hiding in the trees when we first met her, but I don't name names until she and Madeleine are talking in Take. I don't know much about the Forest Guardians, but they aren't human. I think they're something like dryads, but this hasn't been confirmed yet or not. I know that they're fun loving, but that's it.

The Cloud Sprites have a very organized life, thanks to the OCD eldest sister, Cumula. The ten sisters are, perhaps, the oldest beings in Bookania, and possibly have existed since its beginnings since they, unlike the Fairies, are never replaced. However, they are very forgetful creatures, since their brains aren't exactly the most solid things in the world, and they can't be trusted for facts. Each sister has their own job, Cumula keeping everyone in line and throwing tantrums whenever she gets upset. (Or when she just feels like it. The result is a thunderstorm. If she's really upset, she'll start throwing her pet cats and dogs around.) My favorite for working with so far has been Zephyr, who's in charge of wind. Unlike her sisters who ... talk ... like ... this, Zephyrtalkslikethis.

As for the dwarves, you'll have to come back and ask me in a few years, since I haven't messed with them yet.

Oh, and I can't forget about my Sand Witches, now can I? Honestly, I was a little hesitant about adding them in, but people seem to like them, so I suppose I could have done worse. Sand Witches make food, and they love to feed people. Appearances are deceiving with them, and despite their homely faces, they're very nice. And actually, believe it or not, they do not go through their whole lives ugly, but I won't tell you about their "practically perfect in every way" adolecence now. You'll have to wait until meet Poppy and Rye in book 4.

What I like about this world:

The Potential. I have so much Bookania to explore and discover. Also, I love the Fairy Tale elements, trying to cram the logistics of every myth/legend/folktale into one world can be fun.

Oh, and let's not forget the puns! 

What I don't like:

The fact that I shall never know the story on every page of Bookania. I shall never know the entire history. As consolation for this unavoidable truth, I've taking the liberty of declaring all of the original fairy tales and legends as having been part of Bookania some time or another, and many of the Fairy Tale retellings that I have come across in my reading. The Frog that Would be Prince, by Norman Juster was part of Bookania for sure, though a very different page. I also am convinced that Gail Carson Levine's Ella Enchanted, Fairest, and Princess Tale Collection are all on various pages of Bookania.

So, any of you my friends who are writing a fairy tale retelling, feel free to claim that it's part of Bookania. I don't mind. Every page has different logistics, and most don't know that their world is a book and called Bookania, and fewer know about the Author. (though some call him by different names)

What I learned from this world: 

Continuity. Most of my world building projects hitherto have been one-book worlds, or have timelines like Narnia: a visit at the beginning, then hit in miss until you get to the end and hope for the best.

Also cramming. Very fun

These world-building posts are for the promotion of the upcoming release of my book The Ankulen. Feel free to do one yourself, just make sure you refer back to my blog and let your readers know about my upcoming book. If you do write a post, post a link in a comment somewhere on my blog and I'll add you to a giveaway for a copy of my book.

Oh, and if anyone's interested, I was interviewed over at The Notebook Sisters yesterday, along with some other authors, and you can have a chance to win an e-copy of either Sew, or Saffron, as well as some books by some other terrific young authors.

Saturday, August 10, 2013

Memorable Worlds: The Edge

Edge

My Experience with this World: 

When I was younger, my mom would sometimes bring home books for her to read. Often she'd tell me to keep my nose out of them ... but sometimes they looked so good, I just had to peek.

One of these books was The Last of the Sky Pirates, book 5 of the Edge Chronicles. I read bits and pieces of it, but it went back to the library before I could digest enough of it for it to really stick with me. A few years later, I graduated to YA, and mom handed the first book, Beyond the Deepwoods to me. It had been a while since reading 5, so I had forgotten about it, but the book struck me as familiar, especially when it came to the art. At the same time, it was very different, since there were no underground canals, just trees that want to eat you. I liked the book, so I continued the series.

With each book, I became more convinced that I had probably read a book of the series before, or at least something with the same illustrator. When I came to 5 and found the canals, I knew for certain.

I haven't read all of the books yet, indeed it was only recently that I put my hands on 7, but I do intend to finish the series eventually.

I have however, played around on the official website, even gaining an Edge name for myself - Speegspeel Thornwood. Like it?

Origin:

To my knowledge, this is never discussed.

Geography:

I was going to post the map from the official site, but I discovered that it was animated and interactive, so I'll just point you to it.

The Edge is another small world with a lot packed into it. The place itself is best described as a cliff with no mountain attached. There are seven main sections ... or at least, there is in six of the seven books. (There is a huge change in landmarks partway through the series, which is the reason I couldn't find the underground canals in the first four books. They weren't there. BTW, this series, like Narnia, has two orders, publication and chronological. I've read them in publication order, and that's the numbers I've been giving you. By chronological order, I've read all but books 2, 3, and 10.)

First you have the Deepwoods, which is a treacherous place even if you know your way around. If you don't ... well let's just hope that you have a gentle death. Many creatures live here, both friendly and not-so-friendly. Even the plants are dangerous - many, such as the bloodwood, want to eat you!

And then you come to the Twilight Woods, which are twice as dangerous. You won't die there, but there's a ninety-five percent chance that you'll never leave. It has a mind-numbing atmosphere that makes you forget why you came and most of everything else you know. However, as I've said before, you can't die there. Nearby, you find the Edgelands, where it's easy to fall off.

The Mire is next, which is a nearly-uninhabitable patch of ooze and mud which takes up a good chunk real estate.

If you can get across the Mire, you come to Undertown, which is the big city. It is actually built on top of the mire, and it's not a nice place to live either. It is filthy, dirty, rundown and everyone wants your money. Floating above it is Santaphrax, where all the academics and their books live.

Beyond that is the Stone Gardens where stones grow until they get too big and float away.

Yes, I said float away. That's the charm of this world! Many rocks and woods are buoyant and will float away if they aren't tied down. Or at least, they do until the Stone Sickness strikes between books 3 and 5. (4 takes place before 1)

Peoples and Culture:

There is no way that I'll be able to talk about all of the delightful (and not so delightful) creatures and peoples of the Edge. I'm not sure there are humans, rightfully, but the species of the main characters is never explained, so I assume that they are. Many of these "humans" are academics, and they live in Sanctaphrax. Others are merchants, and many are Sky Pirates, and they fly around on boats held up by the floating rocks. This changes after the stonesickness, unfortunately.

The Wood Trolls live in the Deepwoods, and they are a kindly folk. They make their living copping wood - especially the more dangerous ones - and their life's creed is "to never stray from the path."

There are Oak Elves. And banish both the folklore and Tolkien images of Elves out of your mind, for these are small creatures who look more like the green guy on Star Wars (Yoda, isn't it). They're very wise and thoughtful.

And there are the Shrykes, which are bird-like creatures who are extremely matriarchal (Matriarchal societies are actually quite common on the Edge). There are some nice ones among them, but most of them are money-hungry and blood-thirsty.

And there are various types of goblins, many warlike and many peaceful homebodies. And there are waifs, who ears big enough to hear thoughts. And the Slaughters which are actually quite nice. And the Caterbirds .... I shall stop there.

What I like about this world:

The variety and high concept. Also the way that the author(s?) were able to make such a huge change (the stonesickness) and remove one of the most charming elements, and yet keep the magic and charm of the world.

What I don't like:

I wish there were some nice, friendly, non-dangerous habitats where I could move to. I want to live there, but I don't think I could survive. 

What I learned from this world: 

It's okay to tell a world out of order. It's okay to step away from people's preconceived notions and make your elves look like Yoda instead of Elrond. It's fun to mess around with physics and make rock float.

I can't say that it has directly affected any of my writing, but it has affected my bravery in world building.

These world-building posts are for the promotion of the upcoming release of my book The Ankulen. Feel free to do one yourself, just make sure you refer back to my blog and let your readers know about my upcoming book. If you do write a post, post a link in a comment somewhere on my blog and I'll add you to a giveaway for a copy of my book.

Friday, August 9, 2013

Memorable Worlds: Dinotopia

Dinotopia

My Experience with this World: 

When I was nine or ten, my mom brought home this HUGE book, filled with the most beautiful pictures of dinosaurs and people living together for me to read. I ate it up, and was pleased to learn that there was a sequel, which I then preceded to devour. Unfortunately, I ran out of those lovely illustrated books (or at least the ones that my library had) ... so I turned to the mass-authored series. Unfortunately, I only made my way through the first book before my reading was diverted onto more interesting waters, but I later picked up another one at a garage sale or something, and have read that one ... three hundred times or so?

(Interestingly enough, I discovered while looking up a map, the two books of the paperback series that I've read were the first two - and I've read them in the right order!)

I have not watched the TV series, even though we own some of them.

Origin: 

The author of Dinotopia does believe in evolution, and his explanation is that it is an island that has somehow escaped all of the catastrophes that rendered everything extinct everywhere else.

Geography:

This is the map found in my copy of Riverquest.

I forget how big Dinotopia is, but it's big enough to have lots of unexplored places and travel time, yet not so big that people are constantly finding it, so it must be somewhere between the size of England and Australia. (It even looks a lot like Australia) The center of the island is the Rainy Basin, which is not very civilized, being inhabited by the larger carnivores.

Dinotopia is surrounded by waters impossible to navigate, making escape from the island almost impossible.

There are a few very important cities, where most of the human population dwell. Waterfall City, which is beside the Polongo River, is possible the most important, but there is also the Hatchery, where Dinosaurs go to lay their eggs, and the eggs are tended by the humans.

There is an underground cave system, called the Land Beneath, which is quite interesting. It's hinted that this country inspired Atlantis.

Peoples and Culture:

All dinosaurs are sentient, but I don't remember if the pterosaurs are or not. Even the T-rexes and other big carnivores of the Rainy Basin are intelligent.

Dinotopia (despite the fact the literal translation of the word is "terrible place") is a utopia. Everyone lives in harmony with one another, no one takes more food than they need, and often, when a dinosaur feels himself close to death, he'll go to the Rainy Basin so that the big guys can eat him after he's dead. There is no money, and very little concept of ownership.

I don't remember if there is a ruler, per se, but there is a system of Habitat Partners, which are pairs of dinosaurs and humans who travel dinotopia making sure that everything in their charge is normal.

Humans come in two types: those who were born there, and the Dolphinbacks, who were shipwrecked in the uncrossable waters and brought to shore by the Dolphins. There appears to be a bit of a matriarchal system, since those who were born there will tell their original nationality by being "three mothers Irish" or "Twenty mothers English." The language of the humans is a mashup of the many different languages of the people who came there. The dinosaurs each have their own language, but most (and many humans) can understand the other languages, especially the human ones. Some can even mimic the human tongue. For those who can't, there is a written language (made of dinosaur tracks) that most can read.

What I like about this world:

The sheer concept! Intelligent dinosaurs and humans living together in basic harmony is just SO COOL!!!  And the pictures of the original books were amazing. I wish I could paint like that ...

What I don't like:

It is from an evolutionary viewpoint, and it's utopic, but I talked about the utopic issue with Oz ... so ...

What I learned from this world: 

Art can be a terrific asset to a book. Also, hiding islands in the ocean can be fun.

However it was the dinosaur track language is what I found the most inspiring. I love codes, and I faithfully went through the book and decoded every single phrase in every single picture. It gave the book so much hidden depth. If I ever write a book with pictures in it, I will find a way to hide coded text throughout.

These world-building posts are for the promotion of the upcoming release of my book The Ankulen. Feel free to do one yourself, just make sure you refer back to my blog and let your readers know about my upcoming book. If you do write a post, post a link in a comment somewhere on my blog and I'll add you to a giveaway for a copy of my book.

Actually Finishing Something in July 2.5

I know this over a week late, but I've been busy with my worldbuilding posts and making myself a sword. Excuses aside, here is my last post for the Actually Finishing Something in July Challenge.



Did you reach your goal?

Well, I did get quite a bit of editing done on The Ankulen, but I didn't have a cover art until a few days ago, and I'm working on the back right now. I don't know when I'll be able to convince my dad to let me order a proof copy though .

On the other projects ... well ... for the most part, they're all still right where they were the last time I did one of these posts. *ducks head in shame* no, I haven't been having a good writing week, why do you ask?

If you didn't fully complete your goal, were you able to make a good amount of progress in your project? 

See above.

What was the most difficult part of finishing something this July?

Gumption. It's hard to write when it's 101 degrees outside. 

Did you maintain a writing schedule? How often did you write to meet your goal?

Me? Writing schedules? Ehh ... I wrote whenever I pulled up the document. 

List some of the musical tracks/artists you listened to most frequently this July. Tell us why they inspired you and how they fit with your story.

As I've said before, I don't really listen to music. However, Jenny Freitag posted some of the songs that she has been listening to for her latest novel ... and one of them, King and Lionheart, is almost perfect for Clara and Andrew of Water Princess, Fire Prince, especially for the scene I wrote this week. I don't care much for the lead girl's voice, truthfully, but most of the lyrics fit Clara and Andrew.

Other than that ... well, I ran across the soundtrack for The Hobbit on YouTube, so I've been listening to that, too.

Snippets! Share as much, or as little, as you choose.

Since I didn't write very much during the last few weeks, and I don't want to share anymore of The Ankulen, (It'll be out in less than a month. Be patient and soon you'll have the whole thing!) I'm going to share a few snippets from a project I attempted to start at the beginning of the month, namely 300 Dragons. I let it fall to wayside because I realized that I needed to divert more attention to The Ankulen and Bookania, and I discovered that I began in the wrong place, but that can be fixed. Later. Anyways, I did write some good stuff there.

 “Do you think King Hubert is going to prefer you or me me?” Samul asked, flashing Jyson a grin over the stable partition as they saddled their horses. “Because frankly, I don't see how he's going to resist my charming manners.”
Jyson shook his head as he tightened the girth. “If he can get past your pretentious attitude, I think you'll do just fine.”
It's part of my charm, Jy,” said Samul. “Now you, I really don't know what you have to recommend yourself – unless he's interested in broody young knights given to violent bursts and obsessed with keeping their hands smooth.”
You never know,” said Jyson, frowning momentarily at his gloved hands. “I've heard that King Hubert can be quite the broody man himself. We might find that we have much in common.”

Stardrana slid out of her dress and laid the bulky thing on the bed, then turned to the trunk that lay at the foot. Drawing a key from around her neck, she opened it and pulled out a tunic and a pair of trousers. “Yes, but according to my father's people, this is men's clothing.”
Among the royalty, yes,” agreed her mother. “But you yourself tell me that plenty of the common folk dress practically when the need arises.”
Aye, but they don't hunt,” she said, as she slid into the clothing and pulled out her leather armor. “And they especially don't hunt what I hunt.”
They do not need to,” said her mother. “Their curse is different than ours.”

Then the wyrm's eyes went glassy and it stopped moving.
Fun!” exclaimed Bark.
Not fun. Dead. Duh – EH – duh. Dead.”
Bark just hissed before she ran over and tackled Aoril. “Fun!”

Pick a character from your July writing project and describe his or her daily wardrobe. Imagine how this character would dress is he or she were living in the year 2013. 

I believe I shall pick a character from 300 Dragons, since I am already talking about it, namely the lead lady, Stardrana. She leads two lives, that of her father's people and that of her mother's, and dresses appropriately for each.

As you may have gathered from the snippet, when among her mother's people, she wears trousers and a simple tunic, over which she places her leather armor. She wears sturdy boots, and her hair is done sensibly in a braid down her back. Her people hunt the Wyrmen, the fallen dragons, so this is quite a necessary thing. Often, but not always, she will wear sturdy leather gloves.

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However, among her father's people she plays the part of a noblelady, and dresses appropriately. She wears long dresses made of sumptuous silks and satins, often gold or blue because those colors best set off her eye and hair color. Her boots are exchanged for dainty slippers, and she wears her hair down or elaborately done by a maid. She'll still wear gloves often enough, but dainty silk ones.

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If she lived in modern day, she'd probably be the girl who wears a leather biker's jacket over a fancy dress. She's comfortable in both lives (the only reason that she resents her father's is that no one there knows that she sneaks out to hunt Wyrmen), and her clothing reflects that.

Bonus Question (skip if so desired--I shan't be offended)! What was your favorite part of Actually Finishing Something [in] July? What could be done next year to improve the challenge?

I enjoyed reading everyone else's, and answering the questions. I love answering questions.
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